Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
To tell the truth, I don't like singing because I'm not very skilled at it, so I often feel a bit embarrassed when I try. However, I like listening to music for no reason. I just know that I liked doing that.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Uh, no never, because I just spend most of my time studying and after I graduate I just put all my efforts into my work. So umm, in my spare time I have another hobbies. Uh, just got no time for learning to sing.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
To tell the truth, nobody. But if I have to say someone, maybe my mom, I don't know because she's the person I love the most. Maybe I wanna sing for her to show my grateful for all her love.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I'm stressed out I would listen to music and that helps me calm down and getting a little bit happiness.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复和不够连贯。建议减少冗余，使用更连贯的表达方式，并且避免模糊的描述。
예시: I don't enjoy singing because I'm not very skilled and feel embarrassed when I try. However, I love listening to music because it relaxes me and lifts my mood.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有较多口头语和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，注意语法，使用更准确的句子结构。
예시: No, I have never learned to sing because I spend most of my time studying and working. In my spare time, I have other hobbies, so I haven't had time to learn singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答表达了情感，但有语法错误和不够连贯。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。
예시: Honestly, I don't usually sing for anyone. But if I had to choose, I would sing for my mom because she means a lot to me, and I want to show my gratitude for her love.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中时态使用不当，表达不够准确。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because when I'm stressed, listening to music helps me relax and feel happier.
문법
× I just know that I liked doing that.
✓ I just know that I like doing that.
这里使用了过去时态liked，但句意表达的是现在的喜好，应该用一般现在时like。
× in my spare time I have another hobbies.
✓ in my spare time I have other hobbies.
hobbies是复数，前面的限定词应使用other而不是another，another用于单数名词。
× Maybe I wanna sing for her to show my grateful for all her love.
✓ Maybe I wanna sing for her to show my gratitude for all her love.
grateful是形容词，不能直接用作名词，应该用名词gratitude来表达感激之情。
× that helps me calm down and getting a little bit happiness.
✓ that helps me calm down and get a little bit of happiness.
动词help后接动词原形get，而不是动名词getting；同时happiness是不可数名词，前面应加介词短语a little bit of。
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