Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达重复且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I especially like singing with my best friend, as we both feel more at ease when we sing together.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议注意时态一致，使用正确的表达，并且句子要完整。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. Our music teacher taught us proper singing techniques during class, and we practiced carefully.

제안: 回答中“best friend's ticket”表达不准确，影响理解。建议使用准确的词汇，并且句子结构更清晰。

예시: I want to sing for my best friend because she helped me improve my English when we were in primary school. I feel grateful and want to show my appreciation through singing.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，使用更地道的表达。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because many people enjoy it. When they feel stressed or unhappy, they often go to karaoke to sing, which helps them relax and feel more comfortable socially.

× Yes, I like singing for the reason that when I am singing I feel relaxed and I like to sing for my best friend's ticket.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing, I feel relaxed and I like to sing for my best friend's ticket.

动词后面不需要加 -ing 形式，除非是动名词或进行时态。这里表达习惯用一般现在时的动词原形。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was at primary school, my teacher taught us how to sing well.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in primary school, my teacher taught us how to sing well.

介词搭配错误，应该用 in 来表示在某个阶段或地点。

× We at the music class and the teacher will teach us how to sing wild and listen carefully to lessons.

✓ We were in the music class, and the teacher taught us how to sing well and listen carefully to lessons.

句子缺少谓语动词，且时态不一致，wild 应为 well，且需要连接词使句子完整。

× The reason why I want to sing for her is that when I was primary school, she helped me improve my English.

✓ The reason why I want to sing for her is that when I was in primary school, she helped me improve my English.

介词搭配错误，应该用 in 来表示在某个阶段或地点。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people for the reason that many people like to singing.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because many people like to sing.

动词后面不需要加 -ing 形式，like 后面接动词不定式或动词原形。

× When they feel stressed or unhappy, they will go to the KTV to singing which made them feel relaxed and more comfortable at the social society.

✓ When they feel stressed or unhappy, they will go to the KTV to sing, which makes them feel relaxed and more comfortable in society.

to 后面应接动词原形，made 应为现在时 makes，介词搭配错误，应该用 in society。