Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and concise. For example, avoid phrases like 'I am a mobile by nature' which is confusing. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'listen music as well as sing singing some songs'. Use correct verb forms and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Whenever I feel down, I enjoy singing my favourite songs. I believe I have a good voice, which makes singing even more enjoyable for me.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct tenses and sentence structures. Also, be specific about what you learned. Avoid vague phrases like 'I know a lot of how to singing equipments'. Instead, mention the instruments you learned or used. Keep your answer coherent and logical with linking words.

예시: Yes, I learnt singing when I was a kid as part of my school curriculum. During that time, I gained knowledge about singing techniques and also learned to play instruments like the piano and guitar, which helped me improve my singing skills.

제안: Your answer does not directly address the question. The examiner asked 'Who do you want to sing for?', but you talked about why you sing. Make sure to answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details. Also, avoid repetition and improve grammar.

예시: I want to sing for my family and friends because I enjoy sharing my passion with them. Singing for them makes me happy and helps me express my feelings. Additionally, I have learned singing techniques from YouTube channels and my favourite singers.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some vague expressions like 'go outing or something like that'. Use correct subject-verb agreement and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

예시: In my opinion, singing plays an important role in people's lives today because many have hectic schedules and experience stress. Therefore, singing or listening to music helps them relieve stress and enjoy their free time. Overall, I believe singing brings happiness to everyone.

× Well I am a mobile by nature so I love to listen or sing music as a stressbuster for me and whenever I fell down in the dumps I usually listen music as well as sing singing some songs as I have a very good voice.

✓ Well I am mobile by nature so I love to listen to or sing music as a stressbuster for me and whenever I feel down in the dumps I usually listen to music as well as sing some songs as I have a very good voice.

The phrase 'sing singing some songs' is incorrect; 'sing' should be followed directly by the object without repeating the verb. Also, 'listen music' should be 'listen to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Additionally, 'fell' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'feel'. 'A mobile' is incorrect; 'mobile' is an adjective here and does not need an article.

× Yes, when I was kid, there was a music class in my school curriculum.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, there was a music class in my school curriculum.

The phrase 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. This is a common error when referring to singular countable nouns in the past tense.

× At that time I learned a lot about the singing.

✓ At that time I learned a lot about singing.

The definite article 'the' before 'singing' is unnecessary here because 'singing' is used in a general sense, not referring to a specific instance.

× I know a lot of how to singing equipments like piano, guitar, as well as yeah, the singing instruments.

✓ I know a lot about how to sing using equipment like piano, guitar, as well as other singing instruments.

The phrase 'how to singing equipments' is incorrect. 'How to' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'sing', not the '-ing' form. Also, 'equipments' is uncountable and should be 'equipment'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well singing actors are stressbuster for me so whenever I feel down or tired at that time I'm just singing because it act as a stressbuster for me.

✓ Well, singing acts as a stressbuster for me so whenever I feel down or tired, I just sing because it acts as a stressbuster for me.

The phrase 'singing actors' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'singing' should be a noun here meaning the activity. 'It act' should be 'it acts' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'I'm just singing' is better as 'I just sing' to express habitual action.

× I feel relief from the whole world that's why I like singing as well as I learn singing from a lot of YouTube channels and some of my being my favorite singers.

✓ I feel relieved from the whole world; that's why I like singing. I also learn singing from a lot of YouTube channels and some of my favorite singers.

'I feel relief' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I feel relieved' (adjective). The phrase 'some of my being my favorite singers' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'some of my favorite singers'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× To my mind, nowadays singing play a crucial role in everyone's life because everyone have a hectic schedule and they have a stress regarding everything.

✓ To my mind, nowadays singing plays a crucial role in everyone's life because everyone has a hectic schedule and they have stress regarding everything.

The verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has' because 'everyone' is singular. 'A stress' is incorrect; 'stress' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× So with the help of singing or music they can easily relieve from their stress and they enjoy their moment whenever they go outing or something like that.

✓ So with the help of singing or music, they can easily relieve their stress and enjoy their moments whenever they go out or do something like that.

The verb 'relieve' does not require the preposition 'from' when used with a direct object. 'Go outing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go out'. 'Their moment' should be plural 'their moments' to indicate multiple occasions.

× I think so singing is very important for people because it provide happiness to everyone.

✓ I think singing is very important for people because it provides happiness to everyone.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it' (singing). The phrase 'I think so singing' is corrected to 'I think singing' for clarity.