Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误，如“used to singing”应为“used to sing”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: I like singing because it helps me express my emotions. For example, when I feel happy, I sing cheerful songs, and when I feel sad, I sing warm songs to comfort myself.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“when I walking home”应为“when I was walking home”，句子未完成。建议注意时态一致，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. I usually sing naturally when I feel happy or a bit upset. For example, when I was walking home and heard a bird singing, I felt happy and started singing too.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但句子衔接不够自然，存在语法错误，如“the all workers”应为“all the workers”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意冠词的使用。

예시: I want to sing for my parents because they have worked very hard to raise me. Also, I want to sing for all the workers who help make our country and society a better place. Singing is my way to show gratitude.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，如“which can affect other people, to be cheerful and when I was in a difficult time”不完整。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can encourage people and bring them happiness. For example, when I feel happy, I like to sing to share my joy, which can make others feel cheerful too, especially during difficult times.

× when I was sad and about having a bad emotion, I used to singing a warm song to cheer me up.

✓ when I was sad and about having a bad emotion, I used to sing a warm song to cheer me up.

动词“used to”后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式“singing”。这里应改为“used to sing”。

× I sing it naturally when I was a cheerful or when I was a little bit upset.

✓ I sang it naturally when I was cheerful or when I was a little bit upset.

句子描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去式“sang”，而不是现在式“sing”。

× For instance, when I walking home and seeing a bird singing upon me, I feeling happy and I sing to the.

✓ For instance, when I was walking home and saw a bird singing upon me, I felt happy and I sang to it.

“when I walking”缺少助动词，应为“when I was walking”；“seeing”应改为过去式“saw”；“I feeling”应为过去式“I felt”；“I sing to the”缺少宾语，应为“I sang to it”。

× I sing to the.

✓ I sang to it.

“the”是定冠词，不能单独作为代词使用，正确的代词应为“it”指代前文的鸟。

× And I also want to sing for the all workers because they make this country, they make the society a better place.

✓ And I also want to sing for all the workers because they make this country, they make society a better place.

“the all workers”中“the”和“all”不能同时使用，应改为“all the workers”；“the society”前不需要定冠词，应为“society”。

× Because I want to express my singing as a way to express thankfulness.

✓ I want to use my singing as a way to express thankfulness.

句子以“Because”开头但没有主句，结构不完整，应改为完整句子。

× Yes, I think singing is a great way they can encourage people and bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing is a great way to encourage people and bring happiness to people.

“a great way they can encourage”结构不正确，应为“a great way to encourage”。

× For example, when I was happy, I would like to sing to express my happiness, which can affect other people, to be cheerful and when I was in a difficult time.

✓ For example, when I was happy, I would like to sing to express my happiness, which can affect other people to be cheerful, even when I was going through a difficult time.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和完整表达，应调整为连贯完整的句子。