Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I like singing because I think it's a great way to get rid of stress. So I usually sing after the school. For instance, I might sing one or two songs after I finish my homework. I think it's quite a relief and I can get enough relaxation.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Yes, I used to watch several videos about how to change your words, how to make your things feel better, but actually it didn't work. So I asked my friend who is really good at singing and she told me you I need to practice regularly. But actually I still don't know.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
To be honest, I'm not very confident about my singing skills, so I usually avoid singing in front of others. However, if I had to sing for a person, I believe it's my girlfriend because I think it's quite romantic to sing a love song in front of your lover.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, of course. I always believe seeing can invoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also sadness as well. It always if you listen, for instance if you listen to a joyful sound, it will remind you of those happy moment.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议减少重复表达，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法，如“after the school”应为“after school”。
예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. Usually, I sing a couple of songs after finishing my homework, which makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“change your words”和“make your things feel better”不符合语境。建议使用更准确的词汇，表达学习唱歌的经历，并注意句子结构。
예시: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by watching tutorial videos, but they weren't very helpful. Then, I asked a friend who is good at singing, and she advised me to practice regularly, although I still find it challenging.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答内容较好，表达了自己的不自信和想为女友唱歌的理由。建议在表达时使用更多连接词，使句子更流畅自然。
예시: To be honest, I'm not very confident about my singing skills, so I usually avoid singing in front of others. However, if I had to sing for someone, it would be my girlfriend because I think singing a love song to your partner is very romantic.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和句型，表达唱歌带来情感共鸣的观点。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can evoke strong emotions, not only happiness but also sadness. For example, listening to joyful songs can remind people of happy moments in their lives.
문법
× So I usually sing after the school.
✓ So I usually sing after school.
这里的“school”表示的是学校这个场所，通常不需要加定冠词“the”。在表示一般的地点或活动时，英语中常省略冠词。
× she told me you I need to practice regularly.
✓ she told me I need to practice regularly.
句中“you I”是多余且错误的代词使用，应去掉“you”，只保留“I”。
× I always believe seeing can invoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also sadness as well.
✓ I always believe singing can invoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also sadness as well.
原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。使用错误的代词导致句意不清。
× It always if you listen, for instance if you listen to a joyful sound, it will remind you of those happy moment.
✓ It always happens if you listen, for instance if you listen to a joyful sound, it will remind you of those happy moments.
原句缺少谓语动词，且“moment”应为复数形式“moments”。此外，“It always”后应有动词使句子完整。
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