Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在发音错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且表达不够连贯，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意发音准确性，避免重复和语法错误，同时使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy music and following melodies. Usually, I sing after school to relieve stress, especially after finishing my homework.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达学习经历，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I have. I used to watch several videos about improving pronunciation and controlling melody, but they didn't help much. So, I asked my friend who is skilled at singing for advice.

제안: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当（如"it is little"），句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性，使用恰当词汇，并使句子更简洁连贯。

예시: Actually, I don't like singing in front of people because I feel a little embarrassed. I prefer to sing alone, but if I have to sing for someone, it would be my girlfriend because I think it's quite romantic.

제안: 回答中发音错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），表达稍显重复且不够具体。建议注意发音，丰富细节，使用更具体的例子和连接词。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can evoke strong emotions, not only happiness but also sadness. It often reminds people of memories; for example, happy songs can bring back joyful moments from the past.

× Yes, I like seeing 'cause I'm always into the music, so I like to follow the melodies and sing.

✓ Yes, I like singing 'cause I'm always into the music, so I like to follow the melodies and sing.

动词like后面接动名词形式，seeing应改为singing。动词后接动名词是固定用法。

× So after I finish all the homework, I see a few.

✓ So after I finish all the homework, I sing a few.

句中see用法错误，应为sing，表示唱几首歌。动词用法错误导致句意不明。

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have.

此处回答是否学过唱歌，应该用现在完成时have learnt，had不合适。

× I used to watch several videos about how to make your words better or how to control the melody and but I found that it doesn't work so I ask my friend who is really skilled at singing and she.

✓ I used to watch several videos about how to improve your words or how to control the melody, but I found that they don't work, so I asked my friend who is really skilled at singing.

句子结构混乱，and but重复且句尾不完整，时态不一致，应调整连接词，补全句子并统一时态。

× Actually I don't like singing in front of people because I think it is little.

✓ Actually I don't like singing in front of people because I think it is a little embarrassing.

句中little用法不当，应为a little embarrassing，表示有点尴尬。

× but if I must to sing in from a person, I believe it is my girlfriend.

✓ but if I must sing in front of a person, I believe it is my girlfriend.

must后不接to，且from应为front，介词错误。must是情态动词，后接动词原形。

× but if I must to sing in from a person, I believe it is my girlfriend.

✓ but if I must sing in front of a person, I believe it is my girlfriend.

from a person应为in front of a person，介词短语错误。

× Yes, I think so. I always believe seeing can evoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also upset or something else.

✓ Yes, I think so. I always believe singing can evoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also upset or something else.

seeing应为singing，动词形式错误。

× I always believe seeing can evoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also upset or something else.

✓ I always believe singing can evoke a strong emotional response, not only happiness but also upset feelings or something else.

upset作为形容词或动词使用时需搭配名词，单独使用不合适，应改为upset feelings。

× It reminds people some memories.

✓ It reminds people of some memories.

remind后应接介词of，表示提醒某人某事。缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× If the sounds are happy, it will remind you some happy memories.

✓ If the sounds are happy, they will remind you of some happy memories.

sounds为复数，谓语动词应用复数形式they will，且remind后需加介词of。