Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子较长且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing, but only when I am alone or with close friends because I can't sing in tune. Singing in front of strangers makes me feel embarrassed.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但部分表达略显重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富词汇。

예시: I have never learned to sing formally, but I would like to if I get the chance because I want to learn how to sing correctly and hit the right pitch.

제안: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议扩展回答，说明原因，使内容更丰富。

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy the moment without worrying about others' opinions.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显复杂。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Definitely, singing can make people happy. Many are moved by songs because of the meaningful words and emotions they express.

× I like singing, but I only like when I'm beside the person that I'm familiar with or alone because I Can't Sing to the right pitch and if I sing in front of people that I'm not familiar with it makes me feel embarrassed and awkward.

✓ I like singing, but I only like it when I'm beside a person that I'm familiar with or alone because I can't sing to the right pitch, and if I sing in front of people that I'm not familiar with, it makes me feel embarrassed and awkward.

句中缺少宾语"it"，导致句子结构不完整；"Can't Sing"中的"Sing"不应大写；"the person"应改为不定冠词"a person"，因为这里指的是泛指的人；缺少逗号分隔复合句；"people that I'm not familiar with"前应加逗号以分隔从句。建议注意句子结构完整性和标点使用。

× I have never learned how to sing, but if I have a chance I would like to do so because I really want to know how to sing correctly and how to reach the correct pitch.

✓ I have never learned how to sing, but if I have a chance, I would like to do so because I really want to know how to sing correctly and how to reach the correct pitch.

句中"if I have a chance"后缺少逗号，导致句子连接不清晰。虽然时态本身无误，但标点符号的缺失影响了句子的流畅性。建议在条件状语从句后加逗号。

× Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people, so that's why there's many people being touched when hearing others singing, because of the words and the emotion that this song conveyed.

✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people, so that's why there are many people touched when hearing others sing, because of the words and the emotion that this song conveys.

"there's"是"there is"的缩写，后面接复数名词"many people"应使用"there are"；"being touched"改为"touched"更符合被动语态的简洁表达；"hearing others singing"改为"hearing others sing"，动词不定式或原形更合适；"this song conveyed"时态应与前文保持一致，改为现在时"conveys"。建议注意主谓一致和时态一致性。