Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法ミス（"to listening"は"to listen"が正しい）を直し、より効果的に理由を説明しましょう。例えば、なぜ歌うより音楽を聴く方が好きなのか具体的に述べると良いです。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult. Instead, I prefer to listen to music as it helps me relax and enjoy different emotions.

제안: 文法と発音の誤り（"I she's"は不明瞭）を修正し、回答をより明確にしましょう。また、友人についての説明をつなげるために接続詞を使うと良いです。

예시: No, I haven't learnt how to sing. However, my friend works as a professional singer, and she is amazing at it.

제안: 文をつなげる接続詞が不足しており、文法的にも改善が必要です。理由を明確にし、自然な英語で表現しましょう。

예시: I want to sing for my son because his birthday is coming soon, and I want to make it a special day for him.

제안: 文法ミス（"don't need to language"は"doesn't need language"が正しい）や不自然な表現を直し、より論理的で明確な説明を心がけましょう。

예시: Yes, I do. Singing doesn't require language; it is a way to express feelings, so people can connect with each other anywhere in the world.

× I prefer to listening to music.

✓ I prefer listening to music.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the gerund form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to listening' is incorrect; it should be 'listening'.

× I she's amazing singer.

✓ She is an amazing singer.

The phrase 'I she's' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'She is' to correctly refer to the friend. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'amazing singer'.

× I she's amazing singer.

✓ She is an amazing singer.

The noun phrase 'amazing singer' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it because 'amazing' starts with a vowel sound.

× My son Because my son's birthday is close, I want to do special day.

✓ My son's birthday is coming soon, so I want to make it a special day.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and structure. 'Because' should connect two clauses properly, and 'do special day' is incorrect; 'make it a special day' is the correct expression.

× Because, uh, see. Singing don't need to language, just feeling we people can connect anywhere, everywhere.

✓ Because, uh, you see, singing doesn't need language; just feelings. We people can connect anywhere, everywhere.

'Singing don't' is incorrect; it should be 'singing doesn't' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'need to language' is incorrect; it should be 'need language'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.