Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多的语气词和重复，影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少填充词，避免重复，并且用更自然的表达方式说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I have a natural talent for it and I love practicing pop music, which sounds great to me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达自学唱歌的方法，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I haven't taken any formal singing lessons, but I usually practice singing by myself at home. I often watch videos online to learn different techniques, which helps me improve my skills through self-study.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明唱歌的目的，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

예시: Actually, I don't sing for anyone else; singing is just for myself. I enjoy it because it helps me express my emotions and reduce stress.

제안: 回答中有多处重复和语法错误，且句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，清晰表达观点，并举具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because beautiful music helps people relax and relieve stress after a long day. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I instantly feel happier and my mood improves.

× I think I have a good talent on on singing

✓ I think I have a good talent for singing

介词“on”用错了，表达“对某事有天赋”应使用“talent for”，即“对……有天赋”。

× I love practice, umm, practice pop music

✓ I love practicing pop music

动词“practice”在此处应使用动名词形式“practicing”，表示喜欢做某事。

× I haven't attained any formal singing lessons before

✓ I haven't taken any formal singing lessons before

动词“attain”用法不当，通常用“take lessons”表示“上课，接受课程”。

× I usually predict singing by myself at home

✓ I usually practice singing by myself at home

“predict”意为“预测”，此处应为“practice”，表示“练习唱歌”。

× I often watch some video on platform

✓ I often watch some videos on platforms

“video”应为复数形式“videos”，且“platform”应为复数“platforms”，表示多个平台。

× like to learn different tech, technique and improve my skills to self study method helps me practice

✓ like to learn different techniques and improve my skills; the self-study method helps me practice

“tech”应为“techniques”，且句子结构混乱，需分句表达，且“self study method”前加定冠词“the”。

× Well actually nobody I want to sing for because singing is just for myself

✓ Well actually nobody I want to sing for because singing is just for me

“for myself”用法不当，表达“为自己”应使用宾格“for me”。

× I I really enjoy seeing because it can help me express my emotion and and decrease the stressful

✓ I really enjoy singing because it can help me express my emotions and decrease stress

“seeing”应为“singing”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”；“the stressful”用法错误，应为“stress”。

× Yes, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people because beautiful music can help them relax and release stress release stress after a long day

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because beautiful music can help them relax and release stress after a long day

“seeing”应为“singing”；句中“release stress”重复，应删除多余部分。

× when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more joyful and my mood improves improves stead instantly

✓ when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more joyful and my mood improves steadily instantly

“improves improves”重复，应删除多余词；“stead”应为副词“steadily”，修饰动词“improves”。

× Things also allow people to express their

✓ It also allows people to express their feelings

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。