Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the same idea ('I don't like singing') twice. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't enjoy singing because I'm not very good at it, but I do like listening to music.

제안: Your answer is relevant and informative, but it can be improved by removing filler words like 'uh' and making the sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition of 'in my school'.

예시: No, I have never learned to sing, but I took mandatory classes to play instruments like the tabla and harmonium when I was in school.

제안: Your answer shows your feelings well, but it is a bit repetitive and contains some hesitations ('if if'). Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating the same point.

예시: I would love to sing for my girlfriend because dedicating a song is very romantic, but unfortunately, I don't know how to sing well.

제안: Your answer is thoughtful and includes personal experience, but it could be more coherent by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, correct minor grammar errors and make sentences more concise.

예시: Yes, singing can be relaxing for many people, although some may feel self-conscious. For example, I enjoy singing in the bathroom even though I'm not a good singer.

× No, I don't like singing, but I like listening to the songs.

✓ No, I don't like singing, but I like listening to songs.

The use of 'the' before 'songs' is unnecessary here because it refers to songs in general, not specific songs. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× I don't like singing because I'm very bad at singing.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm very bad at it.

Repeating 'singing' is redundant. Using 'it' as a pronoun avoids repetition and makes the sentence smoother.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learned' is the preferred past participle form in American English, which fits the context better here.

× I have taken some classes about playing the instruments.

✓ I have taken some classes on playing instruments.

'Classes about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'classes on' when referring to the subject of the classes. Also, 'the instruments' should be 'instruments' because it refers to instruments in general.

× When I was in school it was mandatory to learn uh some instruments like tabla or harmonium in my school.

✓ When I was in school, it was mandatory to learn some instruments like the tabla or the harmonium at my school.

Adding commas improves readability. 'The' is used before specific instruments like 'tabla' and 'harmonium'. Also, 'at my school' is more appropriate than repeating 'in my school'.

× I would like to sing for my girlfriend but I don't know how to sing if if I can sing, I would definitely love to sing for my girlfriend because it is very romantic if someone dedicates you a song.

✓ I would like to sing for my girlfriend, but I don't know how to sing. If I could sing, I would definitely love to sing for her because it is very romantic when someone dedicates a song to you.

The sentence was run-on and repetitive. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. 'If if' is a typo. 'If I can sing' should be 'If I could sing' to express a hypothetical situation. 'Dedicates you a song' should be 'dedicates a song to you' for correct word order.

× But people often like to sing in the bathroom.

✓ But people often like to sing in the bathroom.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I am a very bad singer but I like to sing in bathroom.

✓ I am a very bad singer, but I like to sing in the bathroom.

The phrase 'in bathroom' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'in the bathroom'.

× I'm a bathroom singer.

✓ I'm a bathroom singer.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.