Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it's very relaxed for me to singing”应改为“it makes me feel very relaxed”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed. At the same time, I enjoy listening to my favorite music while singing.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“many competition”应为“many competitions”，句子结尾不完整。建议注意时态一致和句子完整性，避免口语填充词影响表达。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was 12 years old from my music teachers. I was the school singer and participated in many singing competitions at that time.

제안: 回答内容较为负面且缺乏连贯性，建议回答时保持积极态度，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I would like to sing for my family because singing for them brings me joy and strengthens our bond.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误，如“if singing become”应为“if singing becomes”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，使表达更准确。

예시: I think singing usually brings happiness because it helps people relax and relieve stress. However, if singing becomes a job, it might become stressful for some people.

× Yes, I like singing because when I sing I can reach my inner tranquility and it's very relaxed for me to singing and at the same time when I singing I can listen my favorite music.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing I can reach my inner tranquility and it's very relaxing for me to sing and at the same time when I sing I can listen to my favorite music.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词原形或动名词形式。这里 'to singing' 应改为 'to sing'，'when I singing' 应改为 'when I sing'，'listen my favorite music' 应加介词 'to' 变为 'listen to my favorite music'。

× MMM that is a good question. When I was 12 years old I learned how to sing from my music teachers because I was the singer of our school and I had many competition in singing at that time. So I usually learn it from.

✓ MMM that is a good question. When I was 12 years old I learned how to sing from my music teachers because I was the singer of our school and I had many competitions in singing at that time. So I usually learned it from them.

过去时态中，'learn' 应该用过去式 'learned'，'competition' 应用复数 'competitions'，句尾缺少宾语，需补充 'them'。

× So I usually learn it from.

✓ So I usually learned it from them.

动词 'learn' 后面需要宾语，且 'from' 后应接宾语，缺少宾语导致句子不完整。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× Yes I want to sing for my ex because he was cheating on me and I want to sing a song for him to tell him how painful he hurt me.

✓ Yes, I want to sing for my ex because he cheated on me and I want to sing a song for him to tell him how painfully he hurt me.

过去时态中，'was cheating' 应改为简单过去时 'cheated'，'painful' 应改为副词 'painfully' 修饰动词 'hurt'。

× I think most of the time singing can bring happiness to people because singing can make people relaxed and singing is a very good way for us to relieve our stress.

✓ I think most of the time singing can bring happiness to people because singing can make people feel relaxed and singing is a very good way for us to relieve our stress.

'make people relaxed' 应改为 'make people feel relaxed'，因为 'make' 后接宾语加动词原形或形容词，'relaxed' 作为形容词需用 'feel' 来表达感受。

× But sometimes if singing become a job, this is very stressful for people.

✓ But sometimes if singing becomes a job, it is very stressful for people.

主语 'singing' 是第三人称单数，动词应用 'becomes'，句子后半部分应使用代词 'it' 指代前文，保持句子完整。