Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным. Избегайте грамматических ошибок и избыточных фраз. Лучше сформулировать причину отказа от пения более чётко и добавить связующее слово для плавности.

예시: To be honest, I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice to share my songs with others. However, I know that singing is a great hobby and has many benefits for people.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

예시: If I remember correctly, it was about five years ago when I was 20. Our school held a singing competition, and all students had to sign up to compete for a prize.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Нужно использовать правильные слова (например, 'sing' вместо 'sign'), улучшить структуру предложения и добавить связующие слова для ясности.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because performing for loved ones feels special. They are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to improve in the future.

제안: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и связным, избегая повторов и грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова для плавности и конкретизируйте мысли.

예시: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because many enjoy it as a hobby. Moreover, singing helps some people feel confident and calm, which makes them happy.

× I don't have any specific voice to share my songs with other.

✓ I don't have any specific voice to share my songs with others.

The word 'other' should be plural 'others' when referring to other people in general. 'Other' is an adjective or singular pronoun, but here a plural pronoun is needed.

× Actually. It's really good hobby and have a lot of benefits to people.

✓ Actually, it's a really good hobby and has a lot of benefits for people.

The sentence was fragmented and missing articles and verbs. 'It's' should be followed by 'a' before 'really good hobby'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'hobby'. 'Benefits to people' should be 'benefits for people' for correct preposition usage.

× If I'm not mistaken, it was happening five years ago.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, it happened five years ago.

The phrase 'was happening' is incorrect here because the event is a completed action in the past. The simple past tense 'happened' is appropriate.

× we had one competition in our school and all students should sign for this competition to one award.

✓ we had a competition at our school and all students had to sign up for this competition to win an award.

Use 'a' before 'competition' as it is singular and countable. The preposition 'at' is more appropriate for locations like 'school'. 'Sign for' should be 'sign up for' when registering. 'To one award' is incorrect; 'to win an award' is correct.

× I would like to sign for my family and close friends because signing for close people it's actually gives fields such as a special one and they are supportive and appreciate my efforts which will motivate me in future and actually.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends because singing for close people actually gives feelings of being special, and they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which will motivate me in the future.

'Sign for' should be 'sing for'. 'Fields' is incorrect; the intended word is 'feelings'. The phrase 'such as a special one' is unclear and corrected to 'feelings of being special'. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. The sentence was also restructured for clarity.

× some people really like singing and it's really good hobby for that people.

✓ some people really like singing and it's a really good hobby for those people.

'For that people' is incorrect; 'for those people' is the correct phrase to refer to a group previously mentioned. Also, 'a' is needed before 'really good hobby'.

× some people can feel themselves very confident and calm when they are singing and it make them happy.

✓ some people can feel very confident and calm when they are singing and it makes them happy.

'Feel themselves' is incorrect; 'feel' is sufficient. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.