Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammar errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'restrain my boundary', you could say 'help me unwind'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a long day. Additionally, listening to music often improves my mood and makes my life more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb tenses and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid repetition and be specific about what you have done to improve your singing.

예시: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often learn new songs by myself. This practice helps me improve my voice, pronunciation, and performance skills.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, directly answer the question by specifying who you like to sing for.

예시: I usually sing alone because I feel more comfortable that way. However, on weekends, I often sing with my friends when we hang out together.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid repeating phrases and be specific about how singing brings happiness.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because people often sing when they feel joyful or relaxed. Moreover, singing can be a helpful way to relieve stress and improve people's mood in daily life.

× I really love singing because it helped me relax and restrain my boundary after a long day.

✓ I really love singing because it helps me relax and restrain my boundary after a long day.

The sentence mixes present tense 'love' with past tense 'helped'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' should be used to maintain tense consistency.

× I never have learn how to sing, but I usually learn a song and I want to improve my my voice, my action and overall it's helped me how to pronounce the.

✓ I have never learned how to sing, but I usually learn a song and I want to improve my voice, my actions and overall it has helped me with how to pronounce words.

The phrase 'have learn' is incorrect; the past participle 'learned' is needed after 'have'. Also, 'my action' should be plural 'my actions' to match context. 'It's helped me how to pronounce the' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'it has helped me with how to pronounce words' for clarity and grammar.

× I want to improve my my voice, my action and overall it's helped me how to pronounce the.

✓ I want to improve my voice, my actions and overall it has helped me with how to pronounce words.

The repetition 'my my' is a typographical error. 'My action' should be plural 'my actions' to refer to multiple aspects. The sentence ending is incomplete and unclear; it needs completion for clarity.

× I often I often sing by myself because I feel comfortable when I sing alone and but at the weekend I often hang out with my friend and sing at the.

✓ I often sing by myself because I feel comfortable when I sing alone, but at the weekend I often hang out with my friends and sing together.

The sentence has repetition 'I often I often' and an incomplete ending 'sing at the'. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; 'but' alone is appropriate here.

× I often hang out with my friend and sing at the.

✓ I often hang out with my friends and sing together.

The phrase 'sing at the' is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'at the' and adding 'together' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional error.

× I often hang out with my friend and sing at the.

✓ I often hang out with my friends and sing together.

'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to indicate more than one person, which fits the context better.

× I think the people often singing when they feel the when they feel happy and convenient and I think seeing really helpful and useful for the people in their life.

✓ I think people often sing when they feel happy and comfortable, and I think singing is really helpful and useful for people in their lives.

'The people' is unnecessarily definite; 'people' is better here. 'Often singing' should be 'often sing' to match tense. 'Convenient' is incorrect in this context; 'comfortable' is appropriate. 'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'In their life' should be plural 'in their lives' to match 'people'.