Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复表达“because not only because”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and feel happy.

제안: 回答较为自然，但“Nope”口语化且不够正式，建议使用更正式的否定表达。同时，句子连接可以更流畅。

예시: No, I have never formally learned to sing. Since I was young, I have sung spontaneously because my parents love singing, and growing up in such an environment encouraged me to sing anytime and anywhere.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（如“a exact person”应为“an exact person”），且使用了过多口语填充词“you know”，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，注意语法准确。

예시: Actually, I don't have a specific person to sing for; I just see singing as a fun way to spend my free time. However, I really like Justin Bieber, so if I had the chance, I would love to sing for him.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（如“seeing”应为“singing”），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意语法准确，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because many of us face stress at work, in family, and in relationships. Therefore, singing is a good way to relieve pressure and express emotions.

× I really like singing in my daily time because not only because I can sing very well, but also I think singing is a relaxing way to help me be happy.

✓ I really like singing in my free time because not only can I sing very well, but also I think singing is a relaxing way to help me be happy.

“in my daily time”用法不正确，应该用“in my free time”表示“在空闲时间”。此外，句中“not only because”结构重复，应改为“not only can I sing very well”以符合英语表达习惯。

× Since I was young I was singing spontaneously because I was influenced a lot by my parents.

✓ Since I was young, I have been singing spontaneously because I was influenced a lot by my parents.

“Since”引导的时间状语从句后，主句应使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的动作，故将“was singing”改为“have been singing”。

× They like singing very much and in this atmosphere I like singing anytime and anywhere.

✓ They like singing very much, and in this atmosphere, I like singing anytime and anywhere.

句中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰，添加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Actually, I don't have a exact person to sing for, I just seen as a, you know, a fun way to spare my daily time.

✓ Actually, I don't have an exact person to sing for; I just see it as, you know, a fun way to spend my free time.

“a exact”应为“an exact”，冠词错误；“seen”应为“see”，时态错误；“spare my daily time”表达不当，应为“spend my free time”；此外，句子应分号连接，避免逗号拼接错误。

× I just seen as a, you know, a fun way to spare my daily time.

✓ I just see it as, you know, a fun way to spend my free time.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用现在时“see”；“spare”用法不当，应为“spend”。

× so if I had a chance, I want to, you know, sing to him.

✓ so if I had a chance, I would, you know, sing to him.

虚拟语气条件句中，主句应使用“would”表示假设情况的结果，故将“want to”改为“would”。

× Yes, I really think seeing can bring a lot of happiness to people because nowadays we a lot of people have a lot of stress not only in the work but also in family, in the relationship.

✓ Yes, I really think singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because nowadays a lot of people have a lot of stress not only at work but also in family and relationships.

“seeing”应为“singing”；“we a lot of people”结构错误，应为“a lot of people”；“in the work”应为“at work”；“in the relationship”应为“in family and relationships”，复数形式更合适。

× So it is a good way for us to express our pressure and and we can.

✓ So it is a good way for us to express our pressure, and we can relax.

句子结构不完整，“and and we can”重复且无后续内容，需补充完整表达，如“and we can relax”。