Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying "alone with myself," say "when I'm alone." Also, use singular form "English music" instead of "English musics." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm alone. I like singing English songs because it helps me imitate the singers' accents and improve my pronunciation.

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., "an opera class" instead of "opera classes." Also, avoid repetition like "a a." Use linking words to explain your experience clearly.

예시: I once attended an opera singing class, which was quite challenging because I had to practice hard to develop a strong voice.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition such as "I I" and "or something." Use more formal expressions instead of "gonna." Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel shy singing in front of others, especially my friends, as I worry they might judge me and I lack confidence.

제안: Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your opinion and reasons clearly. Also, correct phrases like "about their in themselves" to "about themselves."

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it boosts people's confidence and helps them feel better about themselves.

× I love singing when I'm alone with myself and especially the English musics because I love to copy the accent of the singers so I can be good at pronouncing.

✓ I love singing when I'm alone with myself and especially English music because I love to copy the accent of the singers so I can be good at pronouncing.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'music' instead of 'musics'. This improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Once I went to the singing class, but it was not a a regular singing class, it was an opera classes and it was so difficult for me because I have to practice really hard to get that much voice.

✓ Once I went to a singing class, but it was not a regular singing class, it was an opera class and it was so difficult for me because I had to practice really hard to get that much voice.

The sentence has several issues: 'a a' is a typo and should be 'a'; 'opera classes' should be singular 'opera class' to match 'a'; 'have to' should be past tense 'had to' to maintain past tense consistency. These corrections ensure proper article use, singular/plural agreement, and tense consistency.

× Myself, I'm too shy to sing in front of everyone, especially my friends, because I I think they're gonna judge me or something and I don't have that much confidence to sing in front of them.

✓ I am too shy to sing in front of everyone, especially my friends, because I think they're going to judge me or something and I don't have that much confidence to sing in front of them.

Starting the sentence with 'Myself' is incorrect here; the subject pronoun 'I' should be used. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is more appropriate. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think singing is a hobby that makes people feel more confident about their in themselves and I think it helps to improve the confidence and the happiness.

✓ I think singing is a hobby that makes people feel more confident in themselves and I think it helps to improve confidence and happiness.

The phrase 'confident about their in themselves' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'confident in themselves'. Also, 'the confidence and the happiness' should be 'confidence and happiness' without 'the' for general concepts. These corrections improve prepositional and article usage.