Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“out of two”不明确，且有重复词汇“prefer I prefer”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I often sing off-key. However, I enjoy listening to others who have beautiful voices and can perform songs well, which I find more interesting.

제안: 回答偏离了主题，提到了绘画而非唱歌。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明原因或感受，保持回答的相关性和连贯性。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing. However, I have taken painting classes before, which helped me develop my creativity.

제안: 回答表达了情感，但存在语法错误和重复，如“per people”和“if I so yeah”。建议简化句子，注意语法，避免重复，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: If I had to choose, I would sing for my parents because they are the most important people in my life. They always support me when I face difficulties, and I really appreciate them.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复，如“bring up can brighten their mood or lift up their mood”。建议使用简洁且正确的句子表达观点，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people. When someone feels sad or in a bad mood, listening to or singing music can brighten their mood.

× I'm often out of two.

✓ I'm often out of tune.

这里的表达 'out of two' 是错误的，正确的短语是 'out of tune'，表示走音。'two' 是数字，和语境不符。

× I prefer I prefer listening to others singing who have beautiful voices and can perform songs well.

✓ I prefer listening to others singing who have beautiful voices and can perform songs well.

句子中重复了 'I prefer'，应去掉重复部分。

× That is a more interesting way to to appreciate.

✓ That is a more interesting way to appreciate.

句子中多了一个 'to'，应删除多余的 'to'。

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

回答 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' 应用现在完成时，表示过去到现在的经历，'I haven't' 更合适。

× However, I had learned painting before when I was in elementary school.

✓ However, I learned painting before when I was in elementary school.

这里描述过去的经历，使用一般过去时 'learned' 更合适，过去完成时 'had learned' 不符合语境。

× That was quite fascinating because I learned how to draw a perfect sketches with white and black.

✓ That was quite fascinating because I learned how to draw perfect sketches with white and black.

'a perfect sketches' 中 'sketches' 是复数，前面不应加不定冠词 'a'。

× That helps me improve my creativity in the future.

✓ That helped me improve my creativity in the future.

前文时态为过去时，保持时态一致，动词应为过去时 'helped'。

× who are the most important per people in my life.

✓ who are the most important people in my life.

'per people' 是错误表达，应为 'people'。

× Whenever I met difficulties, they always stay by my side, which I really appreciate them.

✓ Whenever I meet difficulties, they always stay by my side, which I really appreciate.

'Whenever I met difficulties' 应用一般现在时 'meet'，表示习惯性动作；'appreciate' 后不需要宾语 'them'。

× And so yeah, if I so yeah, I definitely choose.

✓ And so yeah, I definitely choose.

句子结构混乱，重复 'if I so yeah'，应删除多余部分。

× whenever someone have bad mood or feel sad, listening or singing to music can bring up can brighten their mood or lift up their mood.

✓ whenever someone has a bad mood or feels sad, listening to or singing music can brighten or lift up their mood.

'someone have' 主谓不一致，应为 'someone has'；'bad mood' 前应加不定冠词 'a'；'listening or singing to music' 结构不当，改为 'listening to or singing music' 更自然；'bring up can brighten' 重复，应删去 'bring up'。