Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达“我不擅长唱歌”和“在别人面前唱歌感到尴尬”，可以更自然简洁地表达自己的感受，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my skills. Therefore, I feel embarrassed to sing in public or in front of friends, as I worry about making mistakes.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，避免拼写错误，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. Although we had music lessons since primary school, we only practiced simple songs and did not learn proper singing techniques.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer to sing only for myself because I'm not confident. Sometimes, I sing quietly in my mind or when I take a shower to avoid feeling embarrassed.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法问题，建议使用正确单词和句式，表达更准确，同时用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Well, I think it depends. For people like me who are not good at singing, it can be stressful. However, for those who enjoy singing, it can be a great source of happiness.

× So usually singing in public or in front of my friends to some extent is very embarrassing for me.

✓ So usually singing in public or in front of my friends to some extent is very embarrassing for me.

该句中“singing”作为动名词使用，语法正确，无需修改。

× I don't want to make some mistakes when seen in front of others.

✓ I don't want to make some mistakes when seen by others.

这里“seen”是过去分词，需加介词“by”表示被动，正确表达“被别人看到”。

× No, I have never learned how to seem professionally even though we had music lessons since primary school.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing professionally even though we had music lessons since primary school.

原句中“seem”用错，应为“sing”表示“唱歌”，这是词汇错误，不属于语法问题。

× But we just followed the rhymes to see some simple and easy lyrics, professional singing techniques.

✓ But we just followed the rhymes to sing some simple and easy lyrics, professional singing techniques.

“see”用错，应为“sing”，表示“唱”，属于词汇错误。

× Well, I think I just want to sing by for myself.

✓ Well, I think I just want to sing by myself.

“sing by for myself”结构错误，应为“sing by myself”，表示“自己唱”。

× So I just Can't Sing for myself in my mind sometimes or when I take a shower.

✓ So I just can't sing for myself in my mind sometimes or when I take a shower.

“Can't Sing”中“Sing”不应大写，且“sing for myself”表达不自然，建议改为“sing to myself”，表示“对自己唱歌”。

× But for some people who likes or enjoy seeing, it's really enjoyable and can bring them a lot of happiness.

✓ But for some people who like or enjoy singing, it's really enjoyable and can bring them a lot of happiness.

“likes”应改为“like”与复数主语“people”一致；“seeing”应为“singing”，词汇错误。