Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在词汇错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和发音，避免重复表达，并用更自然的句式表达观点。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I find it embarrassing. Sometimes, when I sing, my friends can't even recognize the song, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有语法错误（"using some techniques"应为"use some techniques"），且"see"应为"sing"。建议简化句子结构，注意语法和词汇准确性。

예시: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. Although we had music lessons since primary school, we only followed the music and sang simple lyrics without learning any techniques.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如"out the silent one"），且句子不够连贯。建议使用正确的表达方式，注意句子结构和连贯性。

예시: Usually, I only sing to myself when I take a shower because I feel shy. When I go to karaoke with friends, I prefer to stay quiet and not sing.

제안: 回答中多次出现"seeing"错误，应为"singing"，且句子未完整结束。建议注意单词拼写，避免重复词汇，并完成句子表达完整观点。

예시: Well, it depends. For people like me who are not good at singing, it can be stressful. However, for those who enjoy singing, it can bring happiness and relaxation.

× I'm not good at seeing sometimes.

✓ I'm not good at singing sometimes.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但语境中应使用'singing'，因为谈论的是唱歌能力。'seeing'是看见的意思，错误使用导致句意不明。

× Sometimes when I am seeing, my friends say they cannot tell which song I'm singing, so it's really embarrassing.

✓ Sometimes when I am singing, my friends say they cannot tell which song I'm singing, so it's really embarrassing.

同上，'seeing'应改为'singing'，因为句子描述的是唱歌时的情况。

× No, I have never learned how to sing, although we had music lessons since primary school but actually we didn't learn how to sing professionally or using some techniques.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, although we have had music lessons since primary school, but actually we didn't learn how to sing professionally or use some techniques.

'had'应改为现在完成时'have had'以表示从过去持续到现在的动作；'using'应改为动词原形'use'，因为前面有'didn't'，否定过去时态后动词用原形。

× Just follow the music, follow the beats to see some regular and easy lyrics.

✓ Just follow the music, follow the beats to sing some regular and easy lyrics.

'to see'用法错误，应该是'唱'歌词，故改为'sing'。

× Usually I think for myself when I take a shower, I don't want other people listen to my singing.

✓ Usually I think to myself when I take a shower, I don't want other people to listen to my singing.

'think for myself'应为'think to myself'表示自言自语；'want other people listen'缺少不定式'to'，应为'want other people to listen'。

× I feel awkward so I usually out the silent one when I go to karaoke with my friends.

✓ I feel awkward so I usually stay silent when I go to karaoke with my friends.

'out the silent one'表达不正确，应改为'stay silent'表示保持安静。

× For me or other people like me who are not good at seeing, I don't think it's a happiness, it's a it's a kind of stress.

✓ For me or other people like me who are not good at singing, I don't think it's happiness, it's a kind of stress.

'seeing'应为'singing'，且'a happiness'中'happiness'是不可数名词，不用冠词'a'。