Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy after a long day.

제안: 语法错误明显，表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，清晰表达没有学过唱歌的原因。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I think singing comes naturally when we listen to music.

제안: 表达有重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明想为哥哥唱歌的原因，并注意时态一致。

예시: I want to sing for my brother because he has helped me a lot with my studies, and I really appreciate him.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子表达唱歌带来快乐的原因，并避免重复和错误。

예시: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps us relax and cope with difficulties.

× Yes, I really like singing because when I was I can relax myself when I say when I have a pleasure, I like saying to relax.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because I can relax myself when I sing, and when I feel pleasure, I like singing to relax.

句子中时态混乱，'when I was'和'when I say'不符合语境，应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作。建议使用'I can relax myself when I sing'和'I like singing to relax'。

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I think seeing is a simple things for us and are we like listen music and then we can sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think singing is a simple thing for us and we like to listen to music and then we can sing.

'have never learn'应为现在完成时的过去分词形式'learned'。'seeing'应为'singing'。'a simple things'中things应为单数thing。'are we like listen music'语序错误，应为'we like to listen to music'。

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I think seeing is a simple things for us and are we like listen music and then we can sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think singing is a simple thing for us and we like to listen to music and then we can sing.

'seeing'应为动名词形式'singing'，表示动作的名词形式。

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I think seeing is a simple things for us and are we like listen music and then we can sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think singing is a simple thing for us and we like to listen to music and then we can sing.

'a simple things'中things应为单数thing，因为前面有不定冠词'a'。

× No, I have never learn how to sing because I think seeing is a simple things for us and are we like listen music and then we can sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I think singing is a simple thing for us and we like to listen to music and then we can sing.

'are we like listen music'语序错误，正确语序应为'subject + verb'，即'we like to listen to music'。

× I want to sing for my brother since he taught me a lot and give me gives me a lot of help in my study.

✓ I want to sing for my brother since he taught me a lot and gave me a lot of help in my study.

前半句用过去时'taught'，后半句应保持时态一致，'give'和'gives'应改为过去式'gave'。

× I want to sing for my brother since he taught me a lot and give me gives me a lot of help in my study.

✓ I want to sing for my brother since he taught me a lot and gave me a lot of help in my study.

'give me gives me'重复，且时态错误，应删除重复并使用过去式。

× I really appreciate. I really appreciated him and I want to sing for him.

✓ I really appreciate him. I really appreciate him and I want to sing for him.

'I really appreciate.'缺少宾语，应为'I really appreciate him.'。'I really appreciated him'时态不一致，建议统一为现在时。

× I really appreciate. I really appreciated him and I want to sing for him.

✓ I really appreciate him. I really appreciate him and I want to sing for him.

缺少宾语'him'，导致句子不完整。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people all since it it is a way for us to relax ourselves and when as of face difficulties we can find some a messenger to solve the difficulties listening the song.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a way for us to relax ourselves, and when we face difficulties, we can find some comfort by listening to songs.

句子结构混乱，'all since it it is'重复且不通顺，'when as of face difficulties'语法错误，应为'when we face difficulties'。'some a messenger'搭配错误，应改为'some comfort'。'listening the song'缺少介词'to'。

× ...we can find some a messenger to solve the difficulties listening the song.

✓ ...we can find some comfort by listening to songs.

'listening the song'缺少介词'to'，正确用法是'listening to songs'。