Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较简短，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在表达喜欢唱歌的原因时，增加具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且内容较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I believe singing requires talent. However, I enjoy singing alone at home for fun.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并说明原因，避免重复和冗余。

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not confident about my singing skills, and I feel embarrassed to sing in front of others.

제안: 回答较好，但可以更具体，增加细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和自然。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music often helps people cope with difficult situations and lifts their spirits.

× I like singing because it can make me relaxed.

✓ I like singing because it can make me feel relaxed.

这里的 'make me relaxed' 用法不正确，应该用 'make me feel relaxed'，因为 'make' 后面接感受时需要用动词原形加宾语补足语。

× No, I think singing is a lot from the talent, but I don't really have talent in this part and I always like to sing by myself at home.

✓ No, I think singing depends a lot on talent, but I don't really have talent in this area and I always like to sing by myself at home.

原句中 'singing is a lot from the talent' 语法错误，正确表达应为 'singing depends a lot on talent'，表示依赖于天赋。

× No, I think singing is a lot from the talent, but I don't really have talent in this part and I always like to sing by myself at home.

✓ No, I think singing depends a lot on talent, but I don't really have talent in this area and I always like to sing by myself at home.

'in this part' 用法不当，应该用 'in this area' 或 'in this field' 来表达某个领域或方面。

× I want to sing for myself because my singing is not really good and I think it's a shame to a thing for others.

✓ I want to sing for myself because my singing is not really good and I think it's a shame to do it for others.

'a shame to a thing for others' 结构不正确，应该用 'a shame to do it for others'，表达为“为别人唱歌是一种遗憾”。

× Yes, I think so, because some music can really make us feel better when we meet some problems that make us unhappy.

✓ Yes, I think so, because some music can really make us feel better when we face some problems that make us unhappy.

'meet some problems' 用法不当，应该用 'face some problems'，表示面对问题。