Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用更自然的表达方式，明确说明唱歌如何帮助减压和锻炼自己。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and also serves as a form of exercise for my vocal cords.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议简洁明了地回答是否学过唱歌，并说明通过观看比赛或上网学习。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I often watch singing competitions on TV or browse singing videos on the internet.

제안: 表达不够准确，存在语法错误。建议直接说明想为母亲唱歌的原因，并用恰当的词汇表达感谢和爱。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because I love her and want to thank her for everything she has done for me.

제안: 回答中多次出现'seeing'错误，应为'singing'，且句子结构混乱。建议清晰表达唱歌如何带来快乐和减压。

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress and express their emotions.

× Yes, actually I like singing because I think things can relieve my stress and or exercise myself.

✓ Yes, actually I like singing because I think it can relieve my stress and help me exercise.

原句中“things”不明确，且“exercise myself”表达不自然。应使用“it”指代唱歌，并用“help me exercise”表达锻炼的意思。

× No, I never learned how to sing, but I often look them seeing competition in TV or a surfing Internet on my phone.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I often watch singing competitions on TV or surf the Internet on my phone.

“never learned”应使用现在完成时“have never learned”表示经历；“look them seeing competition”表达错误，应为“watch singing competitions”；“a surfing Internet”错误，应为“surf the Internet”。

× No, I never learned how to sing, but I often look them seeing competition in TV or a surfing Internet on my phone.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I often watch singing competitions on TV or surf the Internet on my phone.

“in TV”应改为“on TV”，因为电视节目用介词“on”；“a surfing Internet”中“a”不应出现，且“surf”是动词，不用加“a”。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

正式英语中介词应放在句首，使用“for whom”更正式；但口语中原句也可接受。

× I want to sing for my mother because I love her and she loves me too. I want to see some songs for my dear mother to thanks her and love her.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because I love her and she loves me too. I want to sing some songs for my dear mother to thank her and show my love.

“see some songs”错误，应为“sing some songs”；“to thanks her”中“thanks”应为动词原形“thank”；“love her”表达不自然，改为“show my love”。

× Yes, definitely seeing can bring happiness to people because I think seeing can relieve their stress, which can bring happiness to themselves and they also can reflect someone's.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because I think singing can relieve their stress, which can bring happiness to themselves and they can also reflect someone's feelings.

“seeing”应为“singing”；“they also can”语序应为“they can also”；“reflect someone's”不完整，应补充“feelings”或具体内容。