Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了你的感受，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议练习使用简单完整的句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing when I am alone because I feel shy around many people. Singing helps me relax and enjoy myself without feeling nervous.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并解释原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I feel afraid to sing in front of others due to my social phobia.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简洁的句子表达自己的想法，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I want to sing only for myself because I prefer to be alone at home. Singing for myself makes me feel comfortable and happy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Happy music makes me feel relaxed and helps me forget my sadness.

× When I was alone I liked singing and I always singing because I am a social phobia.

✓ When I was alone I liked singing and I was always singing because I have social phobia.

这里动词短语需要正确使用动名词形式，且“always singing”前应加助动词“was”表示过去进行时。此外，'I am a social phobia'表达不正确，应改为'I have social phobia'表示患有社交恐惧症。

× If a lot of people it might be 4 I will be afraid and I don't like singing.

✓ If there are a lot of people, I will be afraid and I don't like singing.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语。应使用“There are a lot of people”表达存在大量人群，且句子应分开表达条件和结果。

× No, when I sing for a person I will afraid I am a social phobia.

✓ No, when I sing for a person I will be afraid because I have social phobia.

情态动词“will”后应接动词原形“be”，且“afraid”前缺少“be”动词。表达社交恐惧症应使用“have”而非“am”。

× So actually I speaking in the people I real afraid.

✓ So actually when I speak in front of people, I really am afraid.

动词“speaking”应改为一般现在时“speak”，且“in the people”表达错误，应为“in front of people”。“real”应为副词“really”，且缺少系动词“am”。

× I want to sing for me because I don't want speak for anyone.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I don't want to sing for anyone.

反身代词应使用“myself”而非“me”，且“want speak”缺少不定式“to”，应为“want to sing”。

× I just want stay at home and sing for me and I don't.

✓ I just want to stay at home and sing for myself and I don't.

“want stay”缺少不定式“to”，应为“want to stay”。反身代词应为“myself”而非“me”。句尾“and I don't”不完整，建议删除或补充。

× I like alone.

✓ I like being alone.

“like alone”表达不完整，应使用动名词短语“being alone”表示喜欢独处。

× Thing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Things can bring happiness to people.

“Thing”应为复数形式“Things”，且句子缺少冠词或复数形式导致语法错误。

× I think yes and I likes I like the happy music it make me so relaxed and it will kill my sad emotion.

✓ I think yes and I like happy music; it makes me so relaxed and it kills my sad emotions.

“likes”应为“like”与主语“I”一致；“the happy music”前冠词可省略或改为“happy music”；“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× So I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，根据上下文语境，表达唱歌带来快乐。