Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use clear reasons and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say why singing makes you feel good and describe the feeling more precisely.

예시: Yes, I like singing when I am home alone or taking a shower because it makes me feel relaxed and happy, as if I am performing in a concert. It is a good way to enjoy myself.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. Explain your reason for not learning singing and add supporting details with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am more interested in dancing. I usually go to dance clubs instead of singing lessons. I only sing to myself to feel happier.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific reasons. Try to explain why you prefer singing alone and how you feel about it.

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because I think my singing skills are not very good. Therefore, I prefer to sing alone where I can feel comfortable and enjoy myself without worrying about others.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts with linking words and use more precise vocabulary. Explain how singing affects mental health and why it brings happiness.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because singing cheerful songs boosts positive energy. Moreover, it is beneficial for mental health as it helps reduce stress and improve mood.

× Yes I like singing when I am home alone or when I take shower because it makes me feel like more adorable and feeling like I'm I'm kinda concerned and I'm kinda have concert or something like this so it's good feeling for me.

✓ Yes, I like singing when I am home alone or when I take a shower because it makes me feel more adorable and feel like I'm kind of performing a concert or something like that, so it's a good feeling for me.

The phrase 'take shower' is missing the article 'a', so it should be 'take a shower' (Grammar problem type ID: 22). The phrase 'I'm kinda have concert' is incorrect; 'have' should be replaced with 'performing' or 'having' in the correct form. Also, 'feeling like I'm I'm kinda concerned' is unclear and likely a misuse of verb forms and expressions. The sentence needs restructuring to use correct verb forms and articles for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I have never ever learned how to sing before because I don't have this kind of interesting to learn thinking and among dancers.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing before because I don't have this kind of interest in learning, and I prefer dancing.

The phrase 'have never ever learned' is acceptable but 'ever' is redundant with 'never'. 'Interesting' is an adjective, but the noun 'interest' is needed here. 'To learn thinking and among dancers' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'interest in learning' and a clearer expression about dancing preference. The sentence needs correction in verb tense and noun usage for clarity.

× So I usually go dancing club and not singing.

✓ So I usually go to dancing clubs and not singing.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place, so it should be 'go to dancing clubs'. Also, 'dancing club' should be plural if referring generally. This is a preposition usage error.

× I only sing to myself to feel more happier.

✓ I only sing to myself to feel happier.

The word 'more' is unnecessary before 'happier' because 'happier' is already a comparative form. Using both 'more' and '-er' is redundant. This is a quantifier error.

× No one because I think my singing skills is not that good to show someone or sing with anyone.

✓ No one, because I think my singing skills are not good enough to show to someone or sing with anyone.

The subject 'singing skills' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'good enough' is a more natural expression. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I prefer to sing when I'm alone and not for anybody else.

✓ I prefer to sing when I'm alone and not for anyone else.

'Anybody else' is acceptable but 'anyone else' is more natural in this context. This is a minor pronoun usage preference.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing something happy, it brings and boost you some happy energy and it's good for your mental health and you, you need to choose some good things.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing something happy, it brings and boosts some happy energy, and it's good for your mental health. You need to choose good things.

The verb 'boost' should be in third person singular form 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. The phrase 'you, you need to choose some good things' is repetitive and awkward; it should be simplified. This is a verb form and sentence structure issue.