Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't really like singing because I don't think I have a good voice. Instead, I prefer playing other musical instruments, which I find more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and a bit unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide a clear, structured response with linking words to explain your reasons.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm not a big fan of it. Also, I think singing requires confidence and natural ability, which I don't have.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has some unclear phrases. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't enjoy my singing voice. Instead, I prefer playing the piano, which helps me relax.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using clearer linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness to those who enjoy it. I believe people with talent and confidence should pursue singing as a hobby.

× I don't like singing and I believe I don't have a good voice to sing and I usually prefer playing some other musical instrument rather than singing.

✓ I don't like singing and I believe I don't have a good voice for singing, and I usually prefer playing other musical instruments rather than singing.

The phrase 'some other musical instrument' is incorrect here because 'some' is unnecessary and 'musical instrument' should be plural to match 'other'. Using 'other musical instruments' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is commonly 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Since the question uses present perfect tense, 'learned' is preferred.

× I haven't attended any singing school or classes for that and I believe a person who needs to sing or who has a ability to sing should have the confidence and.

✓ I haven't attended any singing school or classes for that, and I believe a person who needs to sing or who has the ability to sing should have confidence.

The phrase 'a ability' is incorrect; it should be 'the ability' because 'ability' is a singular noun requiring the definite article here. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I really don't enjoy my vocal ability and I don't believe that it's in. I have. I am talented in that.

✓ I really don't enjoy my vocal ability and I don't believe that I have talent in that.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'it's in. I have.' incorrectly. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly and uses 'I have talent' which is grammatically correct.

× Instead, I believe I can play very good piano.

✓ Instead, I believe I can play the piano very well.

The phrase 'play very good piano' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and should not directly modify 'piano' in this context. Instead, 'play the piano very well' uses the adverb 'well' to describe the verb 'play' and includes the definite article 'the' before 'piano'.

× It gives me a relaxation.

✓ It gives me relaxation.

The noun 'relaxation' is uncountable here and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Not for a person like me.

✓ Not for a person like me.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a short response in spoken English, so no correction is necessary.

× And I usually believe that people who have the talent or skill and they feel they are confident and they should go forward and try singing because it's can be a good hobby.

✓ And I usually believe that people who have the talent or skill and feel confident should go forward and try singing because it can be a good hobby.

The phrase 'it's can be' is incorrect; 'it can be' is correct. Also, 'they feel they are confident' is redundant; 'feel confident' suffices. Removing unnecessary pronouns and correcting the modal verb improves clarity and grammar.