Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and I love listening to music.

제안: 回答较为简洁，建议增加细节说明，比如学过哪些乐器，以及学习的经历，以丰富内容。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I played the piano and guitar when I was a child.

제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，建议先明确回答问题，再用连接词补充细节，避免否定句带来的混淆。

예시: I don't usually sing for others, but I enjoy playing the guitar for my girlfriend, family, and friends.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免口语填充词，表达观点时要清晰有逻辑。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to songs helps people relax and feel joyful.

× I like listening song.

✓ I like listening to songs.

这里'song'应该用复数形式'songs'，因为表示喜欢听多首歌曲。同时，动词'listening'后面需要介词'to'，表示听的动作。

× I have learned some instruments when I was a kid.

✓ I learned to play some instruments when I was a kid.

这里使用现在完成时'have learned'与过去时间状语'when I was a kid'不搭配，应使用一般过去时'learned'。另外，'learn instruments'表达不准确，应该是'learned to play instruments'。

× I can play the guitar for my girlfriend or my families or my friends.

✓ I can play the guitar for my girlfriend, my family, or my friends.

'families'应为单数形式'family'，表示家庭成员。并且列举时用逗号分隔更清晰。

× Listening songs can make people relax, most people think that.

✓ Listening to songs can make people relax; most people think that.

'Listening songs'应为'Listening to songs'，动词'listen'后需加介词'to'。另外，句子中间用分号连接更合适。

× And listening songs can bring their happy.

✓ And listening to songs can bring them happiness.

'bring their happy'语法错误，'happy'是形容词，需用名词'happiness'。'their'应改为宾格代词'them'。