Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I am not very good at it. Also, I feel nervous when I sing in front of many people, which makes me lose confidence.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达学习经历和个人看法。

예시: Yes, I took singing classes when I was in primary school. However, I found it difficult because I think singing well requires talent.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，句子较长且缺乏连贯性。建议分句表达，使用恰当的词汇，并注意句子连贯。

예시: I want to sing for my close friends because I don't worry about singing perfectly. I feel relaxed and comfortable with them, and singing together helps us reduce stress.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, sometimes we go to karaoke to sing. It makes us happy and helps reduce stress. Also, listening to songs helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.

× No, I don't like singing because I don't have many skills for singing and maybe there are many people if I see maybe I feel very nervous and lost my confidence.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I don't have many skills for singing and maybe if I see many people, I feel very nervous and lose my confidence.

这里的“lost”应该用现在时“lose”，因为描述的是一般情况。句中“many people if I see maybe”语序不正确，调整为“if I see many people”更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, to be honest when I'm in primary school I went to some class to learn how to see sing but don't have rules for me so I think it's need talent for sing well.

✓ Yes, to be honest, when I was in primary school, I went to some classes to learn how to sing but there were no rules for me, so I think it needs talent to sing well.

“I'm in primary school”应改为过去时“was in primary school”，因为描述的是过去的事情。“some class”应为复数“some classes”。“don't have rules”应为过去时“there were no rules”。“it's need”应为“it needs”。“for sing well”应为“to sing well”。

× I want to sing for my just close friends or best friends because I don't worry about my seeing correct and I'm very relaxed and comfortable and it's a good activities for our to reduce pressure.

✓ I want to sing for my close friends or best friends because I don't worry about my singing being correct and I'm very relaxed and comfortable, and it's a good activity for us to reduce pressure.

“just close friends”中“just”多余，应去掉。“my seeing correct”应改为“my singing being correct”。“good activities”应为单数“good activity”。“for our”应为“for us”。

× Yes, sometimes we go to the Kitty way to have a sing activity. It can improve our happiness and reduce our pressure. And when I listening some songs can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Yes, sometimes we go to the karaoke to have a singing activity. It can improve our happiness and reduce our pressure. And when I listen to some songs, it can make me more relaxed and comfortable.

“Kitty way”应为“karaoke”。“have a sing activity”应为“have a singing activity”。“when I listening”应为“when I listen to”。“some songs can make me”前应加“it”，使句子完整。