Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces my stress. I usually sing during my free time as a way to unwind and enjoy myself.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến câu trả lời khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng chính xác để mô tả kinh nghiệm học hát của mình.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I took basic vocal training classes where I learned about pitch and breathing techniques. These lessons helped me improve my singing skills.

제안: Bạn đã có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu trả lời còn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn về đối tượng bạn muốn hát cho và lý do tại sao.

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it feels more personal and meaningful. They know me well and appreciate my efforts. Moreover, their encouragement motivates me to improve.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting. For example, singing in a group or choir can create a strong sense of joy and connection.

× Yes I listening because it's make me feel better and less stressed and I usually sing in my free time.

✓ Yes, I like listening because it makes me feel better and less stressed, and I usually sing in my free time.

The verb 'listening' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I like listening'. Also, 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Is is a good to connect with them is my.

✓ It is a good way to connect with them.

The sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. It should be restructured to 'It is a good way to connect with them' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, it happened how to sing when I was in the I took pet in the car when I reserved basic vocal training and learning about pitch and dry them.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young. I took part in a course where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and breathing.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases. 'It happened how to sing' is incorrect; 'I learned how to sing' is correct past tense. 'I took pet in the car' is likely 'I took part in a course'. 'Reserved' should be 'received'. 'Dry them' is unclear, likely 'breathing'.

× Singing has a way been a person of mine, so those lessons really helped me improve my car.

✓ Singing has always been a part of me, so those lessons really helped me improve my skills.

'Has a way been a person of mine' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'has always been a part of me'. 'Improve my car' is likely a typo for 'improve my skills'.

× I would like to sing more family and close fans.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close fans.

The preposition 'for' is needed after 'sing' to indicate the audience. 'More' is unnecessary here.

× Singing is for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and implicitly my efforts.

✓ Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciate my efforts.

'Singing is for them feels' is incorrect; it should be 'Singing for them feels'. Also, 'implicitly my efforts' is unclear; 'appreciate my efforts' is appropriate.

× Moreover, they support me in encouragement, motivate me to improve.

✓ Moreover, they support me with encouragement and motivate me to improve.

The phrase 'support me in encouragement' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, the sentence needs 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× Singing loves individuals to express some emotions and can be a very uplifting.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express emotions and can be very uplifting.

'Singing loves individuals' is incorrect; the verb should be 'allows'. 'Some emotions' is better as 'emotions' in general. 'A very uplifting' is incomplete; 'very uplifting' is an adjective phrase that needs a noun or can stand alone as a predicate adjective.

× Especially when dawn could also seen group or car for example, many people feel trifling.

✓ Especially when done in a group or choir, for example, many people feel fulfilled.

'Dawn' is a typo for 'done'. 'Seen group or car' is incorrect; it should be 'done in a group or choir'. 'Trifling' is incorrect in this context; 'fulfilled' or 'happy' is appropriate.