Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，并举了具体例子，内容较丰富。但可以更自然地连接句子，避免重复表达“stressful”和“relieve my stress”，使语言更流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, before exams, I often feel anxious, so my friends take me to karaoke to sing, which really eases my tension.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但句子结构稍显简单，连接词使用不足。可以用更多连词使表达更连贯，同时丰富词汇。

예시: I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I have taken piano classes. Through playing the piano, I have learned about rhythm and pitch, which in turn improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答直接，但表达略显重复且缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词连接句子，并尝试用更丰富的词汇表达自信不足的原因。

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because I'm not very confident in my singing ability. Since I often struggle to hit the right notes, singing alone helps me relax without feeling self-conscious.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“chemicals called,”后缺少具体名称，且“seeing”应为“singing”。建议注意细节，使用准确词汇，并补充具体信息。

예시: Definitely yes. Research shows that singing can stimulate the brain to release endorphins, which improve mood and increase happiness. Moreover, singing allows people to express their emotions freely and can be an effective way to relieve stress.

× so my friends will take me to the karaoke to sing some songs.

✓ so my friends will take me to karaoke to sing some songs.

“karaoke”作为不可数名词，前面不需要加冠词“the”。

× I don't have the opportunity to take the formal singing lessons.

✓ I haven't had the opportunity to take formal singing lessons.

这里描述过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时，表示“我没有过正式的唱歌课程机会”。

× Instead I have taken some piano lessons and by playing the piano I learn the knowledge of rhythm and pitch, which help me sing better.

✓ Instead, I have taken some piano lessons, and by playing the piano I have learned the knowledge of rhythm and pitch, which helps me sing better.

“learn”应使用现在完成时“have learned”，因为是过去到现在的经历；“help”主语是单数“knowledge”，应用第三人称单数“helps”；句中缺少逗号，需加以分隔。

× which help me sing better.

✓ which helps me sing better.

关系代词“which”指代单数“knowledge”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I just want to sing for myself.

✓ I just want to sing to myself.

表达“为自己唱歌”时，通常用“sing to oneself”，表示向自己唱歌。

× I'm not confident when I sing.

✓ I'm not confident when I sing.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And I think singing alone can help me relax better.

✓ And I think singing alone can help me relax better.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Research shows that singing can help the brain produce chemicals called, which help people boost their mood and make them feel happier.

✓ Research shows that singing can help the brain produce chemicals called endorphins, which help people boost their mood and make them feel happier.

句中缺少“called”后面的具体名词，导致句子结构不完整，应补充具体化学物质名称。

× Moreover, seeing can allow people to express their feelings freely, and it's a good way to relieve the pain.

✓ Moreover, singing can allow people to express their feelings freely, and it's a good way to relieve pain.

“seeing”应为“singing”，且“the pain”改为“pain”，因为此处泛指疼痛，不特指某种疼痛。