Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言稍显重复，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议减少重复表达，使用连接词使回答更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and relax. For instance, I often sing along to songs by Taylor Swift and Adele, which helps me feel joyful and energized.

제안: 回答简洁明了，但缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议使用连接词连接句子，并补充更多关于学习过程的描述。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in Junior School. Our teacher taught us several songs, and we practiced singing in time with the beats, which I found quite interesting and enjoyable.

제안: 回答中表达了想为朋友唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够自然，且用词重复。建议调整句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词。

예시: I would like to sing for my best friends because I feel confident around them. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions and show my love, which makes me very happy.

제안: 回答内容较为笼统，缺少具体例子和逻辑连接，表达不够自然。建议提供具体例子，使用连接词，使回答更有说服力和条理。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, singing with friends can strengthen friendships and lift our spirits. Therefore, using our voice positively can spread joy and love.

× I have many singers I like, like Taylor Swift, Billie Eilish and Adele.

✓ I have many singers I like, such as Taylor Swift, Billie Eilish and Adele.

这里“like”重复使用，造成表达不自然。应使用“such as”来列举例子，避免重复。

× I have learned how to sing in my Junior School.

✓ I learned how to sing in my Junior School.

“have learned”表示现在完成时，强调过去到现在的经历，但这里明确指过去某个时间点，应该用一般过去时“learned”。

× The teacher taught us students several songs and we just need to sing with the beats.

✓ The teacher taught us several songs and we just needed to sing with the beats.

句子描述过去发生的事情，情态动词“need”应使用过去式“needed”，保持时态一致。

× I want to sing for my best friend because I'm confident besides them and I like to express my emotion and love to my besties.

✓ I want to sing for my best friend because I'm confident around them and I like to express my emotions and love to my besties.

“confident besides them”中“besides”用法错误，应使用“around”表示“在他们身边感到自信”。另外，“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，表示多种情感。

× It's very happy.

✓ It makes me very happy.

“happy”是形容词，不能直接修饰“it”，应改为“makes me very happy”表达“这让我很开心”。

× Singing can bring all the good things to people who need them, for example, happiness, wish, friendship and love.

✓ Singing can bring all the good things to people who need them, for example, happiness, wishes, friendship and love.

“wish”应使用复数形式“wishes”，与其他名词保持一致。