Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "sync myself with when whenever" and "I am feel shy." Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and refresh my energy. However, I usually sing only when I am alone because I feel shy singing in front of others.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes such as "do not take took" and "if I'll get the chance." Use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like "So yeah." Also, try to provide a more complete and natural response with clear linking words.

예시: No, I have never taken singing classes, but since I enjoy singing, I would love to take lessons if I get the opportunity.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing like "ex explaining my love in the in form of singing." Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use simpler, correct expressions. Also, avoid repeating words and keep your answer concise and coherent.

예시: I haven't really thought about it before, but I would love to sing for my mother because I love her very much. Singing would be a nice way to express my feelings to her.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete ideas, such as "to change our mood and to change." Avoid repeating words like "their their." Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Certainly, singing can bring happiness. Sometimes people feel stressed because of work or family problems, but listening to music and singing along can improve their mood and make them feel better.

× So I try to sync myself with when whenever I am alone because I am feel shy to sing in front of other people.

✓ So I try to sync myself when I am alone because I feel shy to sing in front of other people.

The phrase 'sync myself with when whenever' is incorrect and redundant. 'When' or 'whenever' alone is sufficient. Also, 'I am feel shy' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel shy' because 'am' and 'feel' together is not proper verb usage here.

× Actually, no, I do not take took any classes for the singing, but as I like singing I would love to take the classes if I'll get the chance.

✓ Actually, no, I have not taken any classes for singing, but as I like singing, I would love to take classes if I get the chance.

The phrase 'do not take took' mixes present and past tense incorrectly. The correct form is present perfect 'have not taken' to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'if I'll get the chance' should be 'if I get the chance' because 'if' clauses use present tense for future meaning.

× Actually I didn't think about it that for whom I want to sing but I would love to sing something for my mother because I love her so much.

✓ Actually, I haven't thought about whom I want to sing for, but I would love to sing something for my mother because I love her so much.

The phrase 'didn't think about it that for whom I want to sing' is awkward and incorrect. 'Haven't thought about whom I want to sing for' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'whom' is the correct object pronoun here.

× I would enjoy ex explaining my love in the in form of singing to her.

✓ I would enjoy expressing my love in the form of singing to her.

The phrase 'ex explaining' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'expressing'. Also, 'in the in form' has a repeated preposition 'in' which is incorrect.

× Certainly, yes, sometime people are not in good mood because of their their job or family problems.

✓ Certainly, yes, sometimes people are not in a good mood because of their job or family problems.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'in good mood' needs the article 'a' to be correct: 'in a good mood'. The repeated word 'their' is a typographical error.

× Whenever we listen to music and sing along with that, it helps us to change our mood and to change.

✓ Whenever we listen to music and sing along, it helps us change our mood.

The phrase 'sing along with that' is awkward; 'sing along' is sufficient. The phrase 'helps us to change our mood and to change' is redundant; 'helps us change our mood' is clearer and grammatically correct.