Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih efektif dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata kerja yang tepat.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I often sing to myself when I ride my motorcycle because it helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable. Singing is a great way to relieve stress and improve my mood throughout the day.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan kalimat utama, kemudian tambahkan detail pendukung dengan kata penghubung yang sesuai.

예시: Honestly, I have never learned how to sing professionally, but I enjoy singing for fun. I'm not interested in becoming a singer, but I love singing as a hobby.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah menjawab pertanyaan, namun terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.

예시: I prefer to sing just for myself because I'm not confident singing in front of others, including my friends. I know my voice is not as good as others, so I enjoy singing privately.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih efektif dan jelas. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to express our emotions and feelings. Many people even get emotional when they sing their favorite songs.

× I often sing to myself when I ride motorcycles because it helped me to relaxing and make the journey enjoyable.

✓ I often sing to myself when I ride motorcycles because it helps me to relax and makes the journey enjoyable.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'helped me to relaxing' instead of 'helps me to relax'. After 'help', the base form of the verb should be used, not the gerund form. Also, 'helped' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'helps'. Additionally, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Honestly I never learned how to sing but I like singing but it's for enjoying or waste my time.

✓ Honestly, I have never learned how to sing but I like singing; it's for enjoyment or to pass the time.

The sentence uses 'never learned' which is acceptable but 'have never learned' is more appropriate for experience up to now. Also, 'it's for enjoying or waste my time' is incorrect; 'enjoying' should be a noun 'enjoyment' and 'waste' should be 'to pass' or 'to waste' with proper infinitive form. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I'm not interesting to be a singer but I love singing.

✓ I'm not interested in being a singer but I love singing.

The adjective 'interesting' describes something that causes interest, but here the speaker wants to express their own feeling, so 'interested' is correct. Also, 'to be' should be 'in being' to correctly express interest in an activity.

× I just want to sing for myself because I'm not confident with myself for singing in front of everyone or in front of my friends.

✓ I just want to sing for myself because I'm not confident about singing in front of everyone or my friends.

The phrase 'confident with myself for singing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'confident about' when referring to an activity. Also, 'in front of everyone or in front of my friends' can be simplified to 'in front of everyone or my friends' for conciseness.

× I know my voice not good as the others but singing for my.

✓ I know my voice is not as good as others but I sing for myself.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'my voice'. 'The others' should be 'others' without 'the' when making a general comparison. 'Singing for my' is incomplete and should be 'I sing for myself' to be grammatically correct.

× I know my voice not good as the others but singing for my.

✓ I know my voice is not as good as others but I sing for myself.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used at the end; it should be the reflexive pronoun 'myself' to refer back to the subject. Also, the sentence needs the verb 'is' for completeness.

× I believe singing can bring happiness to the people because with singing we can express our emotions, our feelings on it and most people singing tearful when they sing their favorite song.

✓ I believe singing can bring happiness to people because through singing we can express our emotions and feelings, and most people become tearful when they sing their favorite song.

The phrase 'with singing' is better expressed as 'through singing' to indicate the means. 'Our feelings on it' is awkward; 'our feelings' suffices. 'Most people singing tearful' is incorrect; it should be 'most people become tearful' to form a proper clause.