Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and happy. I often go to KTV with my friends to enjoy singing together.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因，避免使用“umm”等口语填充词。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing based on my own feelings without formal training.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“think for”应为“sing for”，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't have a specific person to sing for. I usually sing with my friends at KTV to relax and relieve stress.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can help people forget their worries and feel comfortable and happy in the moment.

× Yes, I like singing for the reason that seeing can make me feel comfortable and feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing can make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

这里'seeing'用错了，应该用'singing'，因为主语是喜欢唱歌，动名词要和主语动作一致。

× Umm, I went to KTV often with my friends.

✓ Umm, I often went to KTV with my friends.

频率副词'often'通常放在动词前面，且时态正确。

× I never learned how the method of saying umm I just saying with my own feelings.

✓ I never learned the method of singing, umm, I just sing with my own feelings.

'learned'时态正确，但句子结构混乱，'saying'应改为'singing'，且动词形式要正确。

× There is no specific person that I want to think for.

✓ There is no specific person that I want to sing for.

'think for'用错，应该是'sing for'，符合语境。

× I usually go to KTV with my friends just for relaxing to release my pressure, that's all.

✓ I usually go to KTV with my friends just to relax and release my pressure, that's all.

'for relaxing'用法不当，应该用不定式'to relax'，表达目的更准确。

× Yeah, I think it's a good way to help help people to forgetting other things at that moment and the reading is nice so people can feel very comfortable at that time.

✓ Yeah, I think it's a good way to help people forget other things at that moment, and the singing is nice so people can feel very comfortable at that time.

重复了'help'，'to forgetting'应改为'forget'，'reading'应为'singing'，符合语境。