Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is enthusiastic but a bit unclear and slightly repetitive. Try to start directly with your opinion and explain why you like singing, using a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating the question and keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and lifts my mood. It feels like a wonderful way to relax and connect with music.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response, then explain your feelings or intentions about learning to sing. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I haven't learnt how to sing properly, but I am eager to take lessons so that I can improve my singing skills gradually.

제안: Your answer is relevant but slightly unclear and repetitive. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I'd prefer to sing for myself because I'm quite introverted and shy. However, singing alone allows me to enjoy the experience without feeling self-conscious.

제안: Your answer shows your opinion but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear references. Try to use specific examples and correct pronouns, and link your ideas logically for clarity.

예시: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness. For instance, my friends enjoy listening to me sing and often ask me to sing more, which makes them happy. I think singing can spread joy to many people.

× You like singing? Yes, definitely.

✓ Do you like singing? Yes, definitely.

The original sentence 'You like singing?' is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' required for forming questions in the present simple tense. The correct question form is 'Do you like singing?'. This is a sentence structure error because the question is incomplete without the auxiliary verb.

× No, I haven't, but I Can't Sing.

✓ No, I haven't, but I can't sing.

The modal verb 'can't' should be in lowercase unless it starts a sentence. Also, 'Sing' should be lowercase as it is not a proper noun. The error is in capitalization of modal verb and verb, which affects readability and correctness.

× I am. I am eager to learn a little bit so so that I can improve my singing skills.

✓ I am eager to learn a little bit so that I can improve my singing skills.

The phrase 'I am.' is a sentence fragment and does not connect logically to the next sentence. Removing the fragment improves sentence flow and clarity. This is a sentence structure error due to incomplete sentence.

× To sing in front of people and sing to myself is enjoyable.

✓ Singing in front of people and singing to myself is enjoyable.

The phrase 'To sing in front of people and sing to myself' mixes infinitive and base verb forms inconsistently. Using the gerund form 'Singing' consistently is more natural and grammatically correct. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb forms.

× My friends love hearing me singing and she often ask me to sing more.

✓ My friends love hearing me sing and they often ask me to sing more.

The pronoun 'she' does not agree with the plural subject 'friends'. It should be 'they'. Also, 'ask' should be 'ask' for plural subject 'they'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement.

× I think it brings her happiness and I think seeing can bring happiness to more people.

✓ I think it brings them happiness and I think singing can bring happiness to more people.

The pronoun 'her' is inconsistent with 'friends' which is plural, so 'them' is appropriate. Also, 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and verb form.