Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is heartfelt and shows your feelings about singing, which is good. However, try to avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "whenever I sing" repeated and "another space of the another place" which is confusing. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like singing even though I'm not very good at it. When I sing, I feel free and confident, as if I'm transported to another world. Singing helps me relax and express my emotions.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some hesitations and repetitions like "I I'm I" and "try try" which affect fluency. Also, the last sentence "However, I'm really glad" is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear and complete answer with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually try to practice singing by myself at home, and I'm happy to improve gradually this way.

제안: Your answer conveys your idea but has some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as "it's my singing is not targeted to anyone" and "Towards anyone" repeated. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I don't sing for anyone in particular. I sing just for myself, mainly for fun and to pass the time.

제안: Your answer shows your opinion but is incomplete and contains hesitations like "umm" and "I'm speechless" which reduce clarity and fluency. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others. For example, singing can lift someone's mood and create a joyful atmosphere.

× I Can't Sing properly.

✓ I can't sing properly.

The modal verb 'can't' should be in lowercase as it is not at the beginning of the sentence. Also, 'Sing' should be lowercase as it is not a proper noun.

× I I'm I just try to sing, try try to learn singing by myself at home.

✓ I just try to sing, try to learn singing by myself at home.

The repeated pronouns 'I I'm I' are redundant and incorrect. Only one 'I' is needed to maintain clarity and grammatical correctness.

× it's my singing is not targeted to anyone. Towards anyone.

✓ my singing is not targeted at anyone.

The correct preposition to use with 'targeted' is 'at', not 'to' or 'towards'. Also, 'it's' is unnecessary and incorrect here.