Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng lặp lại (ví dụ: "help help"). Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I am with my friends. It helps strengthen our relationships and also allows us to relieve the stress caused by school.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu (ví dụ: "I find myself don't have" không đúng). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh".

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I think my singing ability is natural, although I don't consider myself very talented. Still, I enjoy singing because it feels fantastic and captivating.

제안: Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "uh". Bạn nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và mở rộng câu trả lời một cách tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I like to sing for my friends, family, and others. Singing allows me to express my feelings and thoughts, which helps to strengthen our love and relationships.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong câu ("one of the best way" nên là "one of the best ways"). Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "sharing, sharing" và mở rộng câu trả lời với ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, definitely. Music is one of the best ways to convey happiness and share feelings and thoughts with others, which can bring joy to many people.

× I love singing, especially with friends.

✓ I love to sing, especially with friends.

The verb 'love' can be followed by either the gerund (-ing form) or the infinitive (to + base verb). Both are correct, but 'love to sing' is more common in this context. No strict error, but infinitive is preferred here.

× It helps us to enhance the relationship between me and my friends and help help us to release all the stresses that schools bring about.

✓ It helps us enhance the relationship between my friends and me and helps us release all the stress that school brings about.

The phrase 'between me and my friends' should be 'between my friends and me' because 'between' requires object pronouns and the order is usually others before self. Also, 'help help' is a repetition error. 'Stresses' should be singular 'stress' as an uncountable noun here. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' to refer to the institution in general.

× I find myself don't have any talent for singing, but I enjoy singing because it is really fantastic and captivating.

✓ I find that I don't have any talent for singing, but I enjoy singing because it is really fantastic and captivating.

The phrase 'I find myself don't have' is incorrect. It should be 'I find that I don't have' to correctly connect the clauses. 'Find' is followed by a clause introduced by 'that'.

× Singing is just uh, conveying feelings and thoughts of myself to other people to improve our love and relationships.

✓ Singing is just, uh, conveying my feelings and thoughts to other people to improve our love and relationships.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. Instead, the possessive pronoun 'my' should be used to indicate feelings and thoughts belonging to the speaker.

× My friends, my families, and other people.

✓ My friends, my family, and other people.

The word 'families' is plural, but in this context, 'family' as a collective noun is more appropriate and commonly used.

× Music is one of the best way to convey happiness and sharing, sharing feelings and thoughts with other people.

✓ Music is one of the best ways to convey happiness and share feelings and thoughts with other people.

The phrase 'one of the best way' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun, so 'ways' is correct. Also, 'sharing, sharing' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'share' to maintain parallel structure.