Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Absolutely. I like saying but I'm not good at it. I could say I'm a deaf ear and I'm always out of tune. So I wouldn't like to, you know, the karaoke or singing with my friends. But I also pretty into.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Actually I didn't have the experience of learning thing, but you know, my friend were is pretty good at it, so he so she tried to teach me some tricks. I learned a little bit and even though it's not so helpful.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Actually, I just enjoy singing and don't want to sing for anyone, but maybe in some special occasions, you know, like my family's birthday, I will sing the happy birthday to them. But usually speaking, generally speaking, I just sing in the bathroom by myself and enjoying.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Absolutely. I think singing is a kind of music that is full of passion. At the same time, music is ******. It can affect the people and affect people around you. And if you sing a happy song, definitely pause happiness and.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 50.0제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，导致意思不明确。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和不连贯的句子。可以使用更准确的词汇来描述自己的感受。
예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. However, I'm not very good at it, so I usually sing alone rather than in front of others.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和人称，表达清晰。可以适当补充细节使回答更丰富。
예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, a friend who is good at singing has taught me some tips, but I haven't found them very helpful yet.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答较为冗长且有重复，建议简洁表达观点，避免口语化的填充词。注意语法和时态的一致性。
예시: I usually sing for myself because I enjoy it. However, on special occasions like my family's birthdays, I sing 'Happy Birthday' to celebrate with them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子和恰当的词汇。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it expresses emotions and can uplift people's moods. Singing happy songs can definitely spread joy to both the singer and the listeners.
문법
× I like saying but I'm not good at it.
✓ I like singing but I'm not good at it.
动词 'like' 后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里 'saying' 应改为 'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。
× So I wouldn't like to, you know, the karaoke or singing with my friends.
✓ So I wouldn't like to, you know, do karaoke or sing with my friends.
动词不定式 'would like to' 后面应接动词原形，缺少动词 'do' 和 'sing'，使句子完整。
× my friend were is pretty good at it, so he so she tried to teach me some tricks.
✓ my friend is pretty good at it, so he or she tried to teach me some tricks.
主语 'friend' 是单数，谓语动词应为 'is'，且代词应统一，不能同时用 'he so she'，应改为 'he or she'。
× Actually I didn't have the experience of learning thing, but you know, my friend were is pretty good at it, so he so she tried to teach me some tricks.
✓ Actually I didn't have the experience of learning things, but you know, my friend is pretty good at it, so he or she tried to teach me some tricks.
'learning thing' 应为复数 'learning things'，表示多项学习内容。
× I just sing in the bathroom by myself and enjoying.
✓ I just sing in the bathroom by myself and enjoy.
并列动词应保持一致，'and' 后面应接动词原形 'enjoy'，而不是现在分词 'enjoying'。
× I will sing the happy birthday to them.
✓ I will sing 'Happy Birthday' to them.
'Happy Birthday' 是歌曲名称，应加引号且首字母大写，且不加定冠词 'the'。
× music is ******.
✓ music is wonderful.
原句缺少形容词，需补充合适的形容词来表达音乐的美好。
× And if you sing a happy song, definitely pause happiness and.
✓ And if you sing a happy song, it definitely brings happiness.
句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。
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