Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and could be more natural. Instead of "I'd like to singing," say "I like singing." Also, avoid filler phrases like "I guess" to sound more confident. Try to keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me feel happy.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "learn how to think" seems incorrect here. Use simple and correct grammar, and be clear about your intentions. Also, avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

예시: No, I haven't had the chance to learn singing yet, but I hope to learn it in the future if I get the opportunity.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I would like to sing for my family because they always appreciate my singing. I enjoy performing at family functions in front of them and other relatives.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases like "relieve trash" which seems incorrect. Use appropriate vocabulary and explain your ideas clearly. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it is a joyful activity that helps people relax. Many feel more confident and cheerful when they sing in front of others.

× I guess I'd like to singing because it helps me to relieve stress and feel good.

✓ I guess I'd like to sing because it helps me to relieve stress and feel good.

After 'would like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So, 'like to sing' is correct instead of 'like to singing'.

× No, I didn't get a chance to learn singing. However, in future if I'll get a opportunity to learn how to think, I definitely got this opportunity and learn how to sing a song.

✓ No, I didn't get a chance to learn singing. However, in the future, if I get an opportunity to learn how to sing, I will definitely take this opportunity and learn how to sing a song.

Modal verbs and future tense need to be used correctly. 'If I'll get' is incorrect; it should be 'if I get'. Also, 'a opportunity' should be 'an opportunity' due to vowel sound. 'Got this opportunity' is past tense and incorrect here; it should be 'will definitely take this opportunity' to express future intention.

× I'd like to sing for my family because they always appreciate me and they in and in family function.

✓ I'd like to sing for my family because they always appreciate me and they are present in family functions.

The phrase 'they in and in family function' is incorrect. It should be 'they are present in family functions' to correctly use the verb and prepositions.

× I like to sing a song in front of them and other relatives.

✓ I like to sing a song in front of them and other relatives.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Yes, definitely singing can make people happy. This is because singing can relieve trash and joyful activity.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can make people happy. This is because singing can relieve stress and is a joyful activity.

The word 'trash' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'stress'. Also, 'joyful activity' needs a verb to connect properly, so 'is a joyful activity' is correct.

× Many people feel good when they are singing in front of others and make them confident.

✓ Many people feel good when they are singing in front of others and it makes them confident.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'make them confident'. Adding 'it' clarifies that singing makes them confident.