Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和语句不完整的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing in the shower, which makes me feel comfortable and happy.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，表达有些重复且不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并提供更具体的细节。

예시: Yes, I took singing classes as a child. The teacher taught me how to project my voice, which significantly improved my singing skills.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语句重复且未完整表达观点。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子详细说明。

예시: I like to sing for my family and friends, especially when I feel happy. Singing happy songs helps to share my joy with them.

제안: 回答较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且部分语法错误。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数一致。

예시: Yes, I believe singing and music are universal languages that connect people emotionally. Singing happy songs can bring joy and help people relax, creating a positive atmosphere.

× I think this sounds like singing a song made me feel very relaxed and I I like to actually, you know, I like to sing while I'm taking a shower because it make me feel very comfortable and.

✓ I think singing a song makes me feel very relaxed, and I like to sing while I'm taking a shower because it makes me feel very comfortable.

句中“sounds like singing a song made me feel”结构不正确，应直接用动名词“singing a song”作为主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数“makes”。另外，“it make me”应为“it makes me”，主谓不一致。

× Well, actually when I was a child, my mom sent me to the singing class and the teacher told me how to sing more loudly.

✓ Well, actually when I was a child, my mom sent me to singing class and the teacher taught me how to sing more loudly.

“the singing class”中“the”不必要，且“told me how to sing”表达不准确，应该用“taught me how to sing”，表示教导。

× I think actually it helped me to improve my skills and talent in the singing song.

✓ I think actually it helped me improve my skills and talent in singing songs.

“in the singing song”用法错误，应为“in singing songs”表示在唱歌方面的技能和天赋。

× Actually, I think the answer is anyone where I see them, who I'm seeing to is is completely depend on the situation.

✓ Actually, I think the answer is anyone I see; who I sing to completely depends on the situation.

“anyone where I see them”结构混乱，应简化为“anyone I see”；“who I'm seeing to”错误，正确表达为“who I sing to”；“is is completely depend”主谓不一致，应为“completely depends”。

× Well, I was happy. Well, I'm happy. I would like to sing the happy song and.

✓ When I am happy, I like to sing happy songs.

句子时态混乱，应统一用现在时表达习惯性动作；“the happy song”应为复数“happy songs”，表示一般情况。

× Well, of course, I believe singing and music are a universal language that can connect people emotionally, sing happy songs, can bring joy and helps people relaxed, creating a positive and cheerful atmosphere.

✓ Well, of course, I believe singing and music are universal languages that can connect people emotionally. Singing happy songs can bring joy and help people relax, creating a positive and cheerful atmosphere.

“a universal language”应为复数“universal languages”，因为“singing and music”是复数主语；“sing happy songs”应改为动名词短语“Singing happy songs”；“helps people relaxed”中“relaxed”应为动词原形“relax”，与“help”连用。