Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“them”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Singing also helps me gain confidence.

제안: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时可以补充更多细节。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing in high school because the music teacher taught us various techniques to improve our singing skills.

제안: 回答内容较好，但“good reactions”表达不够具体，且句子略显重复。建议使用更具体的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I want to sing for my parents to express my gratitude and love. Moreover, they always encourage me with positive feedback when I sing.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误（"Seeing"应为"Singing"），语法错误和表达重复。建议注意拼写，使用正确的语法结构，并避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When they listen to their favorite songs or sing themselves, they often feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I like them because when I sing I feel very happy and relax and sing songs make me feel more confident.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing I feel very happy and relaxed, and singing songs makes me feel more confident.

这里“them”指代不明确，应该用动名词“singing”表示喜欢唱歌。动词“relax”应使用过去分词“relaxed”表示感到放松。主语“sing songs”是单数，动词应为“makes”。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing in my high school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my high school.

这里使用一般过去时“learned”更符合表达过去发生的动作，且“have learned”通常用于现在完成时，强调与现在的联系。

× The music teacher told us the techniques to sing better.

✓ The music teacher taught us techniques to sing better.

动词“told”后应接人，表达“教”应使用“taught”。“the techniques”前不需要定冠词，且“to sing better”结构更自然。

× I want to sing for my parents because I want to sing some songs to express my gratitude and love to them.

✓ I want to sing to my parents because I want to sing some songs to express my gratitude and love to them.

表达“为某人唱歌”应使用介词“to”而非“for”。

× Besides, they can provide good reactions when I sing.

✓ Besides, they can give good reactions when I sing.

“provide reactions”搭配不当，通常用“give reactions”或“have reactions”。

× Seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people.

“Seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× When they are listen to their favorite songs they can feel very happy and when they are singing.

✓ When they listen to their favorite songs, they can feel very happy, and when they are singing, they can feel happy.

“are listen”错误，应为“listen”；句子缺少逗号分隔，且后半句不完整，需补充主语和谓语。