Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me feel better and happier. For example, when I sing my favourite songs, it lifts my mood and reduces stress.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid small grammar mistakes and be more specific about your feelings or experiences.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. However, I often go to karaoke with my friends, and I sing just for fun because I don't consider myself a professional singer.

제안: Try to give a complete sentence and expand your answer with reasons or details. This will make your response more natural and effective.

예시: I want to sing for my friends because it makes our gatherings more enjoyable and helps us bond.

제안: Improve your grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because listening to music often lifts my mood and makes me feel more cheerful.

× Yes, I like singing because when I when I sing, I feel like. I feel like I feel better and so happy.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing, I feel better and very happy.

The original sentence has repetition ('when I when I sing') and incomplete thoughts ('I feel like. I feel like'). This causes sentence structure errors. Removing the repeated phrase and completing the thought improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I have never learned how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learnt how to sing.

In New Zealand English, 'learnt' is the preferred past tense and past participle form of 'learn'. Using 'learnt' aligns with local usage and is grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I go to karaoke with my friends but I have never thought I wanted to learn things because I am not actually a singer.

✓ Sometimes I go to karaoke with my friends, but I have never thought I wanted to learn because I am not actually a singer.

The phrase 'learn things' is vague and awkward here. Removing 'things' and adding a comma before 'but' improves sentence flow and clarity, correcting sentence structure errors.

× I just sing for have fun.

✓ I just sing for fun.

The phrase 'for have fun' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'for fun'. This fixes the preposition usage error.

× I want to sing. For my friends.

✓ I want to sing for my friends.

Separating 'For my friends' into a new sentence creates a sentence fragment. Combining it into one sentence corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I think so, because when I listening to the music I feel happier.

✓ Yes, I think so, because when I listen to the music I feel happier.

After 'when', the verb should be in the base form 'listen' rather than the present participle 'listening'. This corrects the verb form usage.