Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng các cấu trúc sai như 'Although... but' và chú ý đến việc chia động từ đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

예시: I enjoy singing because it helps me connect with my friends when we go to karaoke. Singing allows us to express our emotions through songs, which makes the experience very special.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt dài dòng. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am currently busy working at the university and don't have much free time for extra activities like singing classes.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách nối câu để mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'have sing to'.

예시: I usually sing for my family and friends when we go to karaoke because we share a strong bond and don't judge each other's singing skills. This makes me feel comfortable and relaxed while singing around them.

제안: Bạn nên tránh câu trả lời ngắt quãng và lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, definitely. I have seen many people smiling happily while singing at karaoke. Singing allows them to freely express their passion and brings joy to their faces.

× Although I sing very bad, but I love to sing because when I'm going to the karaoke with my friends, singing I think is the best way to connect each other while you're singing.

✓ Although I sing very badly, I love to sing because when I go to karaoke with my friends, I think singing is the best way to connect with each other while you're singing.

The conjunction 'although' and 'but' should not be used together; using both is redundant. Use either 'although' or 'but' to connect clauses. Also, 'sing very bad' is incorrect; the adverb 'badly' should be used to modify the verb 'sing'. Additionally, 'going to the karaoke' should be 'go to karaoke' as 'karaoke' is an uncountable noun here. 'Connect each other' should be 'connect with each other' because 'connect' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to people.

× I think we expresses all of our emotion into the the songs and therefore making our own.

✓ I think we express all of our emotions into the songs and therefore make our own.

The subject 'we' requires the base form of the verb 'express' without 's'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings. The phrase 'making our own' is incomplete and should be 'therefore make our own' to maintain parallel structure.

× I haven't learned how to sing, but I wouldn't take a a class about singing because I think it's a little bit of time wasting because currently I'm working in the university so I don't have a lot of time to like to spend in some other extra activities such as singing.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing, and I wouldn't take a class about singing because I think it's a bit of a waste of time since I'm currently working at the university, so I don't have a lot of time to spend on other extra activities such as singing.

The conjunction 'but' is better replaced with 'and' to connect the two related ideas smoothly. 'A a' is a typo and should be 'a'. 'Time wasting' should be 'a waste of time' for correct noun phrase. 'Working in the university' should be 'working at the university' as 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions. 'Like to spend in' should be 'to spend on' because 'spend' is followed by 'on' when referring to activities.

× I usually go to the karaoke with my family and my friends so I think they are the one I have sing to and would like to sing to because I think that we're having a good bond that giving us no judging between our singing skills.

✓ I usually go to karaoke with my family and my friends, so I think they are the ones I have sung to and would like to sing to because I think that we have a good bond that gives us no judgment between our singing skills.

'The karaoke' should be 'karaoke' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. 'They are the one' should be 'they are the ones' because 'they' is plural. 'I have sing to' should be 'I have sung to' as the past participle of 'sing' is 'sung'. 'We're having' should be 'we have' to express possession. 'That giving us no judging' should be 'that gives us no judgment' for correct verb form and noun usage.

× So I feel kind of comfortable while singing around them.

✓ So I feel kind of comfortable singing around them.

The phrase 'while singing around them' is awkward; removing 'while' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course. I've witnessed that a lot of times when going to the karaoke.

✓ Yes, of course. I've witnessed that many times when going to karaoke.

'A lot of times' is better expressed as 'many times' in formal speech. 'The karaoke' should be 'karaoke' without 'the' as it is uncountable here.

× So I can see that on their faces. They're always having a a big smile on their face while singing.

✓ So I can see that on their faces. They always have a big smile on their faces while singing.

'They're always having' is awkward; 'They always have' is more natural. 'A a' is a typo and should be 'a'. 'On their face' should be 'on their faces' to agree with plural 'their'.

× And besides, I can see that they are freely express their they freely given out. They're passionate about singing.

✓ Besides, I can see that they freely express themselves and are passionate about singing.

'They are freely express' is incorrect; it should be 'they freely express'. 'Their they freely given out' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'themselves'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.