Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达混乱，缺乏直接回应问题的主题句，且内容冗余且不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢与否，并给出具体原因。

예시: No, I don't particularly like singing because I find it challenging, even though I took music classes in school to improve my appreciation of music.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法和表达错误较多，缺乏逻辑和具体细节。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明原因或感受。

예시: Yes, I have tried to learn singing occasionally because I enjoy music, even though I am not very good at it.

제안: 回答较为混乱，缺少主题句，表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答想为谁唱歌，再补充具体场合和感受。

예시: I like to sing for my close friends, especially during their birthdays when we go to KTV together. It feels comfortable because we all know each other well.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不够连贯，且部分信息不相关。建议直接表达观点并用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their emotions. For example, I often sing in the shower to relax and feel better.

× Do you like singing? Actually not, although I have taken music classes in primary, middle and high school.

✓ Actually, no, although I have taken music classes in primary, middle, and high school.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语。应使用完整句子表达否定。

× But it is only for the purpose of improving our music apprecation.

✓ It was only for the purpose of improving our music appreciation.

句首不宜用But连接，应改为完整句子。

× Valentin's was singing from my perspective in request talent.

✓ Valentin's singing was, from my perspective, a request for talent.

代词和句子结构混乱，需调整词序和代词使用。

× Well, I naturally like.

✓ Well, I naturally like singing.

句子缺少宾语，导致结构不完整。

× Sometimes although I don't sing well, I really enjoy anything to unseen, so sometimes I learned to sing and the immediate IK specially famous in assessing.

✓ Sometimes, although I don't sing well, I really enjoy unseen things, so sometimes I learn to sing, especially famous songs in assessments.

句子连接混乱，时态不一致，需调整连接词和时态。

× Sometimes I learned to sing and the immediate IK specially famous in assessing.

✓ Sometimes I learn to sing, especially famous songs in assessments.

时态使用错误，应使用一般现在时表达习惯动作。

× I'm someone who knows how to enjoy music because I love the joint brings.

✓ I'm someone who knows how to enjoy music because I love what it brings.

代词使用错误，'the joint'不合适，应使用指代音乐带来的东西。

× Where is Mastermind? Friends sometimes on for example our friends birthday.

✓ Sometimes, for example, on our friends' birthdays.

代词和句子结构混乱，需调整表达。

× We often go to KTV to sing at night.

✓ We often go to KTV to sing at night.

句子结构正确，无需修改。

× We have about 5 or 6 best friends so even if you don't sing very well, you won't feel ashamed because everyone is very familiar with each other.

✓ We have about 5 or 6 best friends, so even if you don't sing very well, you won't feel ashamed because everyone is very familiar with each other.

句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。

× And absolutely today.

✓ Absolutely, today.

句首不宜用And连接，应改为完整句子。

× Whether you are a good singer or not, singing can make you feel happy and help you release emotions and more of a shower singer you know?

✓ Whether you are a good singer or not, singing can make you feel happy and help you release emotions. And I'm more of a shower singer, you know?

句子连接混乱，代词使用不当，需拆分句子。

× So I'm checking on listening to music and singing while taking a shower.

✓ So I enjoy listening to music and singing while taking a shower.

'checking on'用法错误，应使用'enjoy'表达喜欢。

× Even if I don't think well, I don't care because it can relieve my Vertigo.

✓ Even if I don't sing well, I don't care because it can relieve my vertigo.

'think well'用法错误，应为'sing well'，且'Vertigo'不应大写。