Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'Is is' và 'Is allows', đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I like singing because it is a great way to express my emotions. For example, when I feel stressed or upset, singing helps me relax and feel more comfortable. It allows me to release my feelings and improve my mood.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi như 'Ann just myself' và 'They'll knowledge'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn không học hát.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. I usually sing just to express my feelings by myself, so I don't think I need to learn music theory or singing techniques.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn chỉ hát cho bản thân.

예시: I usually sing only for myself because I am not confident enough to sing in front of others.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh những phần không rõ nghĩa và giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách hát giúp mang lại hạnh phúc.

예시: Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing, I feel very comfortable because it helps me express my feelings and enjoy the melody.

× I like singing because.

✓ I like singing because it is a great way to express my emotions.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'because.' It needs a complete clause to explain the reason. The correction adds 'it is a great way to express my emotions' to complete the thought.

× Is is a great way to express my emotions.

✓ It is a great way to express my emotions.

The pronoun 'Is' is incorrect here; it should be 'It' to refer to singing. This is a subject pronoun error affecting third person singular usage.

× Is allows me to release my feelings and improve my mood.

✓ It allows me to release my feelings and improve my mood.

The pronoun 'Is' is incorrect; it should be 'It' to correctly refer to singing. This is a third person singular pronoun error.

× No, I just sing to express my feelings, Ann just myself, listen to it.

✓ No, I just sing to express my feelings and just for myself; I listen to it.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Ann' seems to be a typo for 'and.' The correction clarifies the meaning and connects ideas properly.

× So I think I don't need to learn. They'll knowledge about music.

✓ So I think I don't need to learn. I don't have knowledge about music.

'They'll' is incorrect here; it should be 'I don't have' to express the student's own knowledge. The original sentence misuses the pronoun and contraction.

× I just sing for myself because I.

✓ I just sing for myself because I am not confident enough to sing for others.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. The correction completes the thought logically based on context.

× I'm not in.

✓ I'm not confident.

The phrase 'I'm not in' is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× I not have enough confident to sing for everyone, Yeah.

✓ I do not have enough confidence to sing for everyone, yeah.

'Confident' is an adjective; the noun 'confidence' is needed here. Also, 'I not have' is incorrect; 'I do not have' is the correct form.

× Of course, in my opinion, when I sing.

✓ Of course, in my opinion, when I sing,

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It needs continuation to complete the thought.

× I'll fill.

✓ I will feel

'Fill' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'feel' to express emotion. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× I will feel very comfortable.

✓ I will feel very comfortable when I sing.

The sentence is correct but adding 'when I sing' clarifies the context and completes the thought.

× Because it's helped express my feelings an like, I don't know.

✓ Because it helps express my feelings, and I don't know,

'It's helped' is incorrect tense; 'it helps' is present tense. 'An' should be 'and.' The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× The melody that the military.

✓ The melody that moves me.

The phrase 'the melody that the military' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction provides a meaningful phrase fitting the context.