Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add a reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Keep your answer concise and natural, using simple and correct English.

예시: Yes, I like singing. I often sing in the shower because it helps me relax, even though I'm not very good at it.

제안: Focus on answering the question clearly and directly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your feelings or experiences with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I was not interested as a child. However, sometimes when I hear others sing, I feel motivated to take singing lessons.

제안: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and avoid confusing phrases. Provide reasons or explanations to support your answer, using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually sing for myself to relax and enjoy the moment. Since I am not a good singer, I focus on singing for my own happiness rather than for others.

제안: Try to organize your answer with clear topic sentences and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel calm and relaxed. For example, some people enjoy listening to others sing, which can reduce their stress and make them feel joyful.

× I like singing, sometimes I sing along mostly when I take shower so I don't really studied or frame myself to see so I'm not at all interested in it.

✓ I like singing; sometimes I sing along, mostly when I take a shower, so I don't really study or prepare myself to see, so I'm not at all interested in it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'studied' (past tense) instead of 'study' (present tense) to match the ongoing action. Also, 'take shower' is missing the article 'a'. The verb forms should be consistent with the present tense context.

× Since childhood I never learned how to say because it's not or something and I'm really interested offer just saying to make myself com.

✓ Since childhood, I have never learned how to sing because it's not something I'm really interested in; I just sing to comfort myself.

The sentence uses 'learned' in simple past, but the present perfect 'have never learned' is more appropriate to express an experience from childhood until now. Also, 'say' should be 'sing' to fit the context, and the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× But sometimes I feel whenever I listen someone watching I feel like I want to study how to sing.

✓ But sometimes I feel that whenever I listen to someone singing, I want to learn how to sing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. 'Someone watching' is incorrect; it should be 'someone singing' to match the context. Also, 'study' is better replaced with 'learn' for acquiring a skill.

× Basically I I don't sing to anyone, I just sing for myself to remain calm and to enjoy myself.

✓ Basically, I don't sing to anyone; I just sing for myself to remain calm and enjoy myself.

No plural or singular error here; this sentence is grammatically correct. Minor punctuation added for clarity.

× I'm not a good singer but on how learn anything how to improve it?

✓ I'm not a good singer, but how can I learn to improve?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. The correction uses present tense modal 'can' to express ability and rephrases for clarity.

× Yes, for some people who are really good, thing is they will find it very happy when they sing and remain calm for themselves.

✓ Yes, for some people who are really good, the thing is they find it very enjoyable when they sing and remain calm.

'Thing' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Find it very happy' is incorrect; 'find it very enjoyable' or 'feel very happy' is correct. The verb 'will find' is changed to 'find' to express a general truth.

× And for those people, some people they like to listen other people singing and it is a great way of reducing their stress and enjoying the moment.

✓ And for those people, some like to listen to other people singing, and it is a great way to reduce their stress and enjoy the moment.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Listen other people' is incorrect. Also, 'way of reducing' is better expressed as 'way to reduce' for natural phrasing.