Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and logical. Use simple and correct sentences to express your feelings about singing. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and relax. Singing feels like a beautiful melody in my life, and it brings me peace and happiness.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid unnecessary phrases that do not add meaning.

예시: No, I have never learned to sing professionally, but I enjoy singing at home, especially in the bathroom. Since childhood, I have been fascinated by music and often sing along with my favorite songs.

제안: Your answer shows good ideas but the sentences are unclear and have grammar errors. Try to express your thoughts clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Music is a way for me to express my feelings. I have never been able to express myself well in front of my father, so I want to sing for him to show how much he means to me.

제안: Your answer has good points but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to use simple and correct sentences. Explain your ideas clearly and avoid confusing phrases.

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing is a beautiful and melodious activity that can make people happy. It helps us release anger and express our emotions through music.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me to express my feeling an also come me down.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me to express my feelings and also calm me down.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions. 'Come me down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'calm me down' meaning to relax or soothe oneself.

× It is like a melody in life.

✓ It is like a melody in life.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× It where keeps the life in a some musical instrument which is very peaceful and my logical.

✓ It keeps life like a musical instrument which is very peaceful and magical.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'It where keeps the life in a some musical instrument' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and word choice. 'My logical' is likely a mishearing of 'magical'.

× No, professionally I have never learned how to sing, but as many people do, I am a bathroom singer.

✓ No, professionally I have never learned how to sing, but like many people, I am a bathroom singer.

The phrase 'as many people do' is awkward here; 'like many people' is more natural. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× From the childhood I was really fascinated by the music.

✓ Since childhood, I have been really fascinated by music.

'From the childhood' is incorrect; 'since childhood' is the correct phrase. Also, 'was really fascinated' is changed to present perfect 'have been really fascinated' to indicate ongoing interest.

× Can I listen?

✓ Can I listen?

This sentence seems out of context and possibly a mishearing; no correction is possible without context.

× I used to listen to music and sing with him that so I have never learned it professionally, but personally I have seen many times and I've song many times.

✓ I used to listen to music and sing along, so I have never learned it professionally, but personally I have sung many times.

The phrase 'sing with him that' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Sing along' is the correct phrase. 'I've song' is incorrect; the past participle of 'sing' is 'sung'. 'I have seen many times' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× Music is a form of expression for me an I have not been able to express myself in front of my father's.

✓ Music is a form of expression for me and I have not been able to express myself in front of my father.

'An' should be 'and'. 'Father's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'father' as the object of the preposition.

× So I would definitely try to sing it in front of my father as you will know what I what he meant for me through singing.

✓ So I would definitely try to sing in front of my father so he will know what he means to me through singing.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'You will know what I what he meant' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× So that's my wish.

✓ So that's my wish.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Yes, definitely. I think it's the most beautiful Ann melodical thing that can happen, an I don't think is there anything that can come a person down other than music.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think it's the most beautiful and melodious thing that can happen, and I don't think there is anything that can bring a person down other than music.

'Ann' should be 'and'. 'Melodical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'melodious'. 'Come a person down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring a person down'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× And it also the method to went out our anger and gather in our went in some melody.

✓ And it is also a method to let out our anger and gather our emotions in some melody.

'Went out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'let out'. 'Gather in our went' is incorrect and unclear; 'gather our emotions' is a clearer expression. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.