Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整且表达不自然。建议用完整句子表达观点，并简要说明原因。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I believe I am not very good at it.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因，避免语法错误。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think I have the talent for it.

제안: 回答不连贯且含糊。建议明确回答问题，使用连贯的句子表达想法。

예시: I would like to sing for people I respect, such as my family and close friends.

제안: 回答中断且表达混乱。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress and feel refreshed.

× Actually, no 'cause.

✓ Actually, no.

句子结构不完整，'cause'是口语中'because'的缩写，但这里没有后续内容，导致句子不完整。建议去掉'cause'，使句子完整。

× I'm not talented in saying so I'm not interested in it, so I have never been to the same class.

✓ I'm not talented in singing, so I'm not interested in it, so I have never been to the same class.

'saying'用错了，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。'talented in'后面应接正确的动名词形式。

× Nears a lot of people that I respect, so I think I will think to the people I respect.

✓ Near a lot of people that I respect, so I think I will sing to the people I respect.

句子中'Nears'拼写错误，应为'Near'，且后半句表达不清，'think to the people'不合语法，应改为'sing to the people'。

× Yes, the answer is absolutely, absolutely yes.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

句子冗余，重复使用'absolutely'，简化表达更自然。

× I think he can make people. Away from their pressure and Mcdeere. Make them refresh themselves. People can. Getting a lot of help.

✓ I think it can help people get away from their pressure and make them feel refreshed. People can get a lot of help.

句子断断续续，缺少连贯性和完整的谓语，'he'指代不明，应为'it'指代'singing'，'Mcdeere'拼写错误，应为'relax'或'refresh'，整体需重组句子使其通顺。