Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多语法和发音错误，且部分词汇使用不当，影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和冗余，同时注意发音的准确性。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day. Also, singing makes me feel confident and happy. For example, I often sing my favorite songs when I am alone at home.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子结构不完整。建议练习完整句子的表达，注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时丰富词汇表达。

예시: No, I haven't learned to sing formally. However, I have tried to improve my singing skills by watching videos on TikTok in my free time, and it has helped me improve little by little.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，导致表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达自己的观点，并使用恰当的连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I don't like singing for other people because I feel a bit nervous and shy. I prefer to sing alone as it helps me feel more confident and relaxed.

제안: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议加强句子结构练习，使用恰当的连接词，并丰富具体细节以支持观点。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and feel cheerful. For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they often feel less stressed and more positive. Singing also allows people to express their emotions.

× Yeah, I really enjoy seeing because it helps me relax a an redo stressful stress after a busy day.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce stressful stress after a busy day.

动词 enjoy 后面应接动名词形式，原句中将 singing 错写为 seeing，且 redo 应为 reduce，且多余的冠词 an 应删除。

× I also think my voice on the quiet Placid so saying makes me feel confident and high pay.

✓ I also think my voice is quite placid, so singing makes me feel confident and happy.

形容词 quiet 应为 quite，形容词 Placid 应小写且用法不当，应为 placid，high pay 应为 happy，且句子缺少动词 is。

× For example, I often see in my favorite songs when I. At home alone.

✓ For example, I often sing my favorite songs when I am at home alone.

动词 see 应为 sing，且句子不完整，缺少谓语动词 am。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. However, Alvin tried to learn C skills by myself.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. However, I have tried to learn singing skills by myself.

人名 Alvin 可能是误写，应为 I，时态应保持一致，使用现在完成时 have tried，C skills 应为 singing skills。

× So watching videos on TikTok, it helps me to improve little by little in my free time.

✓ So, by watching videos on TikTok, it helps me improve little by little in my free time.

介词使用不当，需加 by 表示方式，且 improve 后不需 to。

× I don't like saying for another people.

✓ I don't like singing for other people.

another people 用法错误，应为 other people。

× Because I also feel a bit in numbers and impressed, I preferred to sing alone only thing to myself seeing presently and they to help me feel more confident and relaxed thing just for myself make their experience.

✓ Because I also feel a bit nervous and unconfident, I prefer to sing alone only to myself. Singing helps me feel more confident and relaxed. Singing just for myself makes the experience special.

原句中 in numbers 应为 nervous，impressed 用法不当，preferred 应为 prefer，句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整词语顺序。

× Yes, I think so. I think seeing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps them relaxed and the forecast there.

✓ Yes, I think so. I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and feel better.

seeing 应为 singing，helps 后应接动词原形 relax，the forecast there 语义不明，改为 feel better。

× Larry is full view, for example, when people seeing their furies owns the overfill more cheerful and the less stress.

✓ For example, when people sing their favorite songs, they feel more cheerful and less stressed.

Larry is full view 语义不明，furies owns the overfill 应为 favorite songs，overfill 错误，less stress 应为 less stressed。

× Seeing also allow people to experience their emotion.

✓ Singing also allows people to experience their emotions.

seeing 应为 singing，allow 主语为单数应加 s，emotion 应为复数 emotions。