Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Постарайтесь отвечать более естественно и связно, избегая лишних пауз и повторений. Используйте простые и правильные предложения, чтобы выразить свои мысли ясно.

예시: Yes, I like singing. I usually sing when I am taking a shower or when I feel upset. Singing helps me feel better and relax.

제안: Ответ содержит несколько ошибок и нечеткую формулировку. Следует использовать правильные выражения и связные предложения, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и естественным.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I have always been interested. Despite being shy, I wanted to join vocal classes, but my parents didn't allow me.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова для улучшения связности и разнообразить лексику, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и выразительной.

예시: Well, I mainly want to sing for myself because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Moreover, singing is not just a hobby; it is a way to feel better and reduce stress. For instance, after a long day, singing makes me feel calm and happy.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неточные выражения. Следует использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также более четко объяснять свои мысли, чтобы ответ был понятным и естественным.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when we sing or dance, our dopamine levels increase, which makes us feel happier and more energetic.

× Will I do like singing?

✓ Do I like singing?

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will I do' which is not appropriate here. The correct modal verb usage for asking about a general preference is 'Do I like'. The modal verb 'will' is used for future intentions or predictions, not for asking about current likes or dislikes.

× Mostly I sing when I'm in best taking a shower.

✓ Mostly I sing when I'm in the bath taking a shower.

The phrase 'in best taking a shower' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct phrase should be 'in the bath taking a shower' or simply 'while taking a shower'. This corrects the sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.

× Or if I'm mad, I play music which I like and.

✓ Or if I'm mad, I play music which I like and sing out loud.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' It should be completed to maintain sentence structure and clarity. Adding 'sing out loud' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Once I even had a chance to attend a vocal classes but my parents didn't allow me.

✓ Once I even had a chance to attend vocal classes but my parents didn't allow me.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'vocal classes'. Articles should agree in number with the noun. Since 'vocal classes' is plural, no article or 'some' should be used instead of 'a'.

× Once I even had a chance to attend a vocal classes but my parents didn't allow me.

✓ Once I even had a chance to attend vocal classes but my parents didn't allow me.

The noun 'classes' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× The more energy you spent by singing, the more hapiness it brings to you as an example.

✓ The more energy you spend by singing, the more happiness it brings to you, for example.

The verb 'spent' is past tense, but the sentence is a general statement and requires present tense 'spend'. Also, 'hapiness' is misspelled and should be 'happiness'. The phrase 'as an example' is better expressed as 'for example'.

× The more energy you spent by singing, the more hapiness it brings to you as an example.

✓ The more energy you spend by singing, the more happiness it brings to you, for example.

The sentence expresses a general truth, so the present tense 'spend' is appropriate instead of past tense 'spent'.

× When we sing or dance, our deafening levels increases and we become more happier.

✓ When we sing or dance, our deafening levels increase and we become happier.

The subject 'levels' is plural, so the verb should be 'increase' not 'increases'. Also, 'more happier' is incorrect because 'happier' is already a comparative form; 'more' is redundant. The correct form is simply 'happier'.