Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I often enjoy listening to singers on TV, and I dream of becoming a singer myself one day.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú nội dung.

예시: No, I have never taken any singing lessons. I usually sing just for fun when I feel like it, but I haven't had time to practice or learn proper techniques.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là việc sử dụng động từ đúng dạng. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Since I have never taken singing classes, I don't feel confident singing in front of strangers. However, if I had the chance to sing seriously, I would choose to perform for my family.

제안: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không trả lời câu hỏi. Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and connect with others. For example, singing with friends can create joyful moments.

× Yeah, under I'm not a single, but singing is my person.

✓ Yeah, although I'm not a singer, singing is my passion.

The phrase 'under I'm not a single' is incorrect. 'Under' is a preposition and does not fit here. The correct conjunction is 'although' to express contrast. Also, 'single' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singer'. 'My person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'my passion'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I've preferred to washing the single on the TV, so I have a small dream that maybe I could be a single in the future.

✓ I prefer watching singers on TV, so I have a small dream that maybe I could be a singer in the future.

'I've preferred to washing' is incorrect; 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' or by 'to' plus the base verb. 'The single' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singer'. 'On the TV' should be 'on TV'. The sentence is corrected to use proper verb forms and vocabulary.

× So I'm very value singing.

✓ So I really value singing.

'I'm very value' is incorrect because 'value' is a verb and cannot be used with 'very' as an adjective. The correct adverb is 'really' to modify the verb 'value'. This correction fixes the verb usage and adverb placement.

× I'm regret to say no.

✓ I regret to say no.

'I'm regret' is incorrect because 'regret' is a verb and should not be used with 'am' in this context. The correct form is 'I regret to say no.' This fixes the modal verb usage and verb form.

× I only sing according my moods in.

✓ I only sing according to my moods.

'According' requires the preposition 'to' after it. 'In' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. The corrected sentence uses the proper prepositional phrase 'according to my moods'.

× It was a small favorite so I don't have time to train detail about it.

✓ It was a small favorite, so I don't have time to train in detail about it.

'Small favorite' is unclear; possibly 'a small hobby' or 'a minor interest' is intended. 'Train detail' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'train in detail'. Adding a comma improves sentence structure. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes preposition use.

× I don't have enough confidence to singing in front of.

✓ I don't have enough confidence to sing in front of others.

'To singing' is incorrect; after 'to' (infinitive marker), the base verb 'sing' should be used. 'In front of' requires an object; adding 'others' completes the phrase. This correction fixes verb form and preposition usage.

× So if I have the opportunity to singing seriously, I would choose my family.

✓ So if I have the opportunity to sing seriously, I would choose my family.

After 'to' (infinitive marker), the base verb 'sing' should be used, not 'singing'. This correction fixes the verb form.