Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有多处发音错误和拼写错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），影响了表达的自然性和有效性。建议注意发音准确，避免重复和语法错误，同时保持句子简洁，使用连词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing. I started singing when I was in high school because it helps me relax and lift my mood when I feel upset or stressed.

제안: 回答中重复了短语“To be honest”，且句子结构不完整。建议避免重复，使用完整句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: To be honest, I have never had the chance to receive professional training because I don't plan to become a professional singer.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和不连贯的表达（如'potent fast wars'和'cheer. Everyday app'），影响理解。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达清晰具体。

예시: I want to sing for my family, especially during important festivals. We are very close, and singing for them helps me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误（如'income'应为'singing'，'See'应为'Singing'），影响表达的准确性。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并保持句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs alone or with friends.

× Absolutely. I'm into seeing.

✓ Absolutely. I'm into singing.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'singing' to match the context of the question about liking singing.

× I have taken up saying when I was in high school.

✓ I took up singing when I was in high school.

The phrase 'have taken up saying' is incorrect; 'took up singing' is the correct past tense form to indicate when the action started in the past.

× It offers me a great way to relax and unwind when I am upset or.

✓ It offers me a great way to relax and unwind when I am upset or distressed.

The sentence is incomplete and 'distrust' is incorrect here; 'distressed' fits the context of feeling upset or troubled.

× Once we see it around it lift up my mind.

✓ Once I sing, it lifts up my mind.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect; 'Once I sing, it lifts up my mind' correctly expresses the intended meaning with proper subject-verb agreement.

× To be honest. To be honest, I never have the chance to. Received some professional training.

✓ To be honest, I have never had the chance to receive any professional training.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly uses 'Received' capitalized and as a past participle; the correction forms a complete sentence with proper tense and structure.

× After all, I'm not determined to be a professional singer.

✓ After all, I'm not determined to become a professional singer.

The phrase 'determined to be' is less natural; 'determined to become' better expresses the intention of not pursuing a professional singing career.

× I really want to sing songs for my family, especially during some. A potent fast wars.

✓ I really want to sing songs for my family, especially during some important festivals.

The phrase 'a potent fast wars' is nonsensical; likely intended to be 'important festivals' or similar, which fits the context of family gatherings.

× We are really close and I feel relaxed. Singing songs in front of them is a great way to cheer. Everyday app.

✓ We are really close and I feel relaxed. Singing songs in front of them is a great way to cheer up every day.

The phrase 'cheer. Everyday app.' is fragmented and incorrect; 'cheer up every day' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× Yes, I believe the income definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people.

'Income' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing'. Also, 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.

× See allows individual to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

'See' is incorrect; it should be 'Singing'. Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'their'.